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Postby Rain Matrix » Sep 28th, '10, 04:50

I say this pain will never affect me, tho I Know I Will
it must have been Overkill, the day I Overdosed on Pills

at first my muscles twitched but soon I was Frozen Still
I'll Hold this Guilt Close Until my rhymes finally Show my Skill

one day I'm gonna sit and wonder why my Health's Gone
that's when these lyrics will remind me of when I Felt Strong

I'm starting to think that I write just to prove Myself Wrong
the pain resurfaces and I have something to Dwell On

Momentarily, I can Barely Breath, I sit in my Chair and Wheeze
as I Carefully work with these words like they're my Therapy

they surround me with glory like I transformed into Pericles
I'm not gonna care if I'm Very Weak, when they Bury Me

so go on and hate how Terribly I Tear these Beats To Shreds
everything the Fools Said is a New Breath in this Dudes Chest

I Inhale the Doubt cuz I know there's no way I'm Failin' Now
say goodbye to this verse, I just took it's coffin lid and Nailed it Down
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Re: Back for a reason

Postby classthe_king » Sep 28th, '10, 04:54

Rhymes and flow on this were insane man.
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Postby Ka0t1c » Sep 28th, '10, 06:02

fuck yeah man, that is dope! great ending too :y:
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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