quick rhyme about weed

[Ka0t1c]

herb calms my nerves to ease my mind
when i'm at home or on the road for a drive
i just dive into my swole bud sack and pack up a bowl
then i'm comfortably ready to roll!
feeling good from head to toe
instead of dealing with life's woes
cuz this is me, my reality is my show
you'll see my personality from my flows
as i'm fighting to reach my goals
because my dreams many don't like, no
police wanna cease my soul it seems
cuz peace has it's high toll
oh, i know, that's why i grow
but we all wanna be free
i love the marijuana leaves
until i go under soil 6 feet deep i'll smoke
so i will always compete
against the government's fleet
it calls on survival techniques
and also my vital instincts

[Rain Matrix]

blaze that shit up! good stuff

next time I roll a joint or a blunt, I'll take a puff for you

[Ka0t1c]

thanx bro! i'll be smokin there with ya someday.

[Weather Man]

I really loved the beginning of this, the rest was nice too though good shit.

[Ka0t1c]

thanx for checkin this out

[ilovebender.com]

herb calms my nerves to ease my mind
when i'm at home or on the road for a drive
i just dive into my swole bud sack and pack up a bowl
then i'm comfortably ready to roll!
feeling good from head to toe
instead of dealing with life's woes
cuz this is me, my reality is my show
you'll see my personality from my flows
as i'm fighting to reach my goals
because my dreams many don't like, no
police wanna cease my soul it seems
cuz peace has it's high toll
oh, i know, that's why i grow
but we all wanna be free
i love the marijuana leaves
until i go under soil 6 feet deep i'll smoke
so i will always compete
against the government's fleet
it calls on survival techniques
and also my vital instincts

this has inspired me. it's cool, different to what I'm used to but I like the subject matter and I even like what seemed like a laid back flow until I noticed a sudden mood change at the lyric 'as i'm fighting to reach my goals' it got all serious, from weed to life, like that.
was deep though.

[Ka0t1c]

thanx man, i appreciate that, i hope i can influence others to write meaningful lyrics and inspire other aspiring artists and ppl in general.

[ilovebender.com]

oh of course , I'm totally gonna write my weed song now because of this , so 'props' and thumbs up and stuff

[ilovebender.com]

viewtopic.php?f=24&t=101010

So I finally wrote what this inspired me to write, I also noted what I said as one of the links of feedback on what I wrote, and I doubt I used that feed as a link of feedback on anything else.