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Postby classthe_king » Oct 11th, '10, 02:55

http://www.forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=24&t=99661&p=1369249#p1369249

I forgot I was Sentus and thought I was DZK while writing this :unsure:
Some of it's old material but I doubt anyone on here besides Solace remembers it so its new for yall

I was formed in the darkest part of the planet
This foul creature rose scarred from a sand pit
Bleeding acid with claws sharper than lancets
Ferocious fangs and scales harder than granite
I step up on the earth ptyalizing tar as volcanic
Lava erupts from my fingertips startin a panic
The malevolent heinous dark has been planted
Into my soul and my heart had then vanished
I am harder to manage because I gotta fire all
But now fuck a clip. . . I spit . . . naga fireballs
The most vile claws tear and rip through flesh
Rupturing your brain as all of your tissues left
Scattered around you; all the haters will deny
But I burn with the same blaze as Eta Carinae
When I am ridin on beats, I strive in the heat
I form a lyrical calamity derived from the beast
I arrive on a fleet of ships from a distant galaxy
And gain trust by showing you instant alchemy
Before a take my final form as a vicious Valkyrie
And have the entire human resistance out for me
But you have no chance when I conjure my tones
The worst monster to roam conquered the throne
Relax and just bear with us, rap is just scared of us
Just let me entertain you like Maximus Meridius
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Re: Nex

Postby MakaveliTheDon » Oct 11th, '10, 02:58

Vocabulary was very complex. And I love those 3 syllable multis you maintained through most parts of this piece. Very, very lyrical.

I didn't necessarily understand or enjoy the concept but your rhymes made up for it :y:

I liked it man :smoking:
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Everything I love go away from here (I'm wishin I could do without it)
Far, far away from here (and nothin' I can do about it)
Everything I love go away from here (I'm wishin I could do without it)


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Re: Nex

Postby Solace » Oct 11th, '10, 03:09

That was fucking intense, great work. I recall a few lines, not too many though, that I've seen before. Overall, this is great. Your rhyme schemes never fail to impress me along with an excellent vocabulary. I can definitely see this done by DZK. I learned a couple concepts out of this too, so that's not bad either. Keep the writing up.
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Re: Nex

Postby Xray » Oct 11th, '10, 05:13

Dude this was tight. Love the imagery. It flows crazy to this beat I'm making atm.

If this is for our collab then I might be changing the beat, if it's ok with you?
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I speak literally, figuratively, the prophet gone


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Re: Nex

Postby Yah-hah » Oct 11th, '10, 05:55

Yeah man I definitly see DZK in this one. I like alot of the lines, like they're not punches or watever but just flat out cool lines ya know. I enjoy pieces like this when they're done right.

Mind feeding my new piece?
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
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Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Nex

Postby classthe_king » Oct 11th, '10, 22:56

Props guys, I got you Yah
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Re: Nex

Postby mcZu » Oct 15th, '10, 22:01

Did you show this to me? Because for some reason it feels like I've already read it, maybe I'm just tripping..

Anyways, it was pretty good, not your style, though. But for a DZK kind of piece it was good.
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Re: Nex

Postby classthe_king » Oct 16th, '10, 04:47

mcZu wrote:Did you show this to me? Because for some reason it feels like I've already read it, maybe I'm just tripping..

Anyways, it was pretty good, not your style, though. But for a DZK kind of piece it was good.


Some of it is old material and I think I did show you it when I wrote some of it a long time ago lol. But thanks for the feed
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