Macdaddy Feat. McAnonymous

[macdaddy019967]

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Xray my niigga you took too long to write your verse, so i have decided to post this peace without you.
I haven't written in awhile but here it is.

Macdaddy:
Whose that I’m always seein in front of cameras/
Flashin fraudulence for the publics to grab on/
Makes you feel important, the heads that you stand on/
The stardom you’ve gain, the throne that you’ve sat on/
Is about to be shat on, ripped up and upon/
All levels of martyring tricks that are cons/
Wit arduous grips that split frames till the dawn/
Turns to dusk and the dust from your guts is now gone/
Wit the wind, still classic, is my spit still drastic?/
I’d like to think so, given that I drip acid/
I swimming wit alligators, which make my piss placid/
Illusively, to leave a sitcom bitch ravaged/
Unraveling sentences directed to the magna/
Of television, telling me the visions of my stanza/
Are controversial and could cause propaganda/
To destroy images, hence my objective enacted/




MCAnonymous:
Lyrically I'll scare ya, couldn't bother wit the fiya, barely
Cause I'll bust a move that'll break ya ankles like Mariah Carey!
Any advesary trying to rhyme, I'll bend yo skin
and I'll leave you out in the open just like Jay Leno's Chin
Your bitch is known fore-head like she's Trya Banks
Make your scream niigga like Mel Gibson to his fuckin' skank (HA!)
Will Smith battle axes for I am Legend
Why you steppin? My mic a weapon, for live dissection
and my detection, of wack rappers is Omnipresent
LIke Jackie Chan eyes, widescreen, I'm bombin' peasants

Macdaddy:
Fuck the fashion and fame, heart throbs and flames/
I’m a scorch these pigs wit hog-wash for names/
Surrounding the news when there more shit at stake/
That effects the common man, but they say, keep my place/
I’m low on the totem, opinions are frozen/
In a limbo a nympho would fuck wit for moments/
We in a world crisis, but celebrities hold up/
An aura of glamour that media moguls will show us/
On a continuous bases, whether sexist or racist/
Prejudice vacates when we all tune into stations/
To catch reality shows on some Ray J and Flav shit/
Hell, even athletes are whores satiated by ratings/
And attention than movie star turn handicapped patient/
Exclaim your discrepancies, I’m a stay with my statement/
These fuckers are proud and walk around shameless/
Like they shit don’t stink, but reeks like Hannibal’s basement/

[Devil'sAdvocate]

man this is dope

anon has a sick 8 bars

yall should get saJJad on this bitch and record it.

[classthe_king]

LMFAO @ that Tyra banks line

[ThomasJ]

Damn,this was great,MC Anon KILLED it!!!
Really liked his verse.

Mac,yours was dope too,but I feel like you can do way better.
Like I said,still dope.

Fav line :

and my detection, of wack rappers is Omnipresent
LIke Jackie Chan eyes, widescreen, I'm bombin' peasants

[macdaddy019967]

thanks for the feed guys

@thomas J
i will go try to go harder on my next one, and thanks for the feed man it's greatly appreciated.

[Stavros]

Who'd you bite Mac? I remember seeing a piece you REALLY did and you couldn't rhyme your way out of a wet paper bag.

[macdaddy019967]

Who'd you bite Mac? I remember seeing a piece you REALLY did and you couldn't rhyme your way out of a wet paper bag.

lmao
haha your funny man i didn't bite anyone
I had xray come up with the theme for me and I wrote to it, you can ask him yourself.
If you want, you and I can make a piece where you come up with the theme just to prove to you
im not biting off of anyone

thanks for the concern though homie

[Stavros]

I remember Oceanic Pimps is all lol.

[Xray]

I'm glad you didn't wait for me. I have my stuff to work on so I have a lot of work to do. Anon's punches were nice as fuck. Your drop was pretty good, better than I expected. Dope collabo. We shall collab one day, with better timing.

[gutawafang]

This is the real shit.

[macdaddy019967]

I remember Oceanic Pimps is all lol.

lol, that shit was tight my niigga
that shit is classic

thanks for reading the piece though
and from the looks of it, it seems like i rhymed myself out of the paper bag this time lmao

[macdaddy019967]

I'm glad you didn't wait for me. I have my stuff to work on so I have a lot of work to do. Anon's punches were nice as fuck. Your drop was pretty good, better than I expected. Dope collabo. We shall collab one day, with better timing.

Yea for sure, homie
I appreciate the feedback,
hit me up when you got some free time and we can collab on some other shit

@Guta
I always appreciate your feedback my niigga
Let me know when your ready to write something man, as a matter of fact get on MSN so we can talk about some ideas if you got time

[gutawafang]

I remember Oceanic Pimps is all lol.

lol, that shit was tight my niigga
that shit is classic

WORD nig.ga.