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Good Punch?

Postby Stavros » Oct 18th, '10, 01:29

Treat the industry like a mattress cause they're Cain and you're Abel
In other words sleep on em and never ever fuck with a label
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Re: Good Punch?

Postby classthe_king » Oct 18th, '10, 03:17

I think I understand, but it's ehhhh. It's only cause Cain killed Abel right?

There isn't any Cain/Cane or Abel/Able in it?
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: Good Punch?

Postby Emadyville » Oct 18th, '10, 03:51

not bad, I like how it's pretty in-depth :y:
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Re: Good Punch?

Postby Stavros » Oct 18th, '10, 04:25

classthe_king wrote:I think I understand, but it's ehhhh. It's only cause Cain killed Abel right?

There isn't any Cain/Cane or Abel/Able in it?

Nope, none of that.
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Re: Good Punch?

Postby J Roc » Oct 18th, '10, 18:50

Naww bro but keep trying.
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Re: Good Punch?

Postby Stavros » Oct 18th, '10, 21:37

Rated G Superstar wrote:Naww bro but keep trying.


Here lemme try

my GATS DONE POPPPED but my RAPS DON'T STOP
once the MAG GETS COCKED, your crew's a Facebook pic, everyone gets TAGGED IN ONE SHOT
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Re: Good Punch?

Postby J Roc » Oct 18th, '10, 21:47

Stavros wrote:
Rated G Superstar wrote:Naww bro but keep trying.


Here lemme try

my GATS DONE POPPPED but my RAPS DON'T STOP
once the MAG GETS COCKED, your crew's a Facebook pic, everyone gets TAGGED IN ONE SHOT


hahaa ......... more original. kinda my style too :confusion:

count ya syllables tho bro
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Re: Good Punch?

Postby mcZu » Oct 18th, '10, 21:59

^No shit, he was mocking you..
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Re: Good Punch?

Postby Solace » Oct 18th, '10, 22:31

Stavros wrote:
Rated G Superstar wrote:Naww bro but keep trying.


Here lemme try

my GATS DONE POPPPED but my RAPS DON'T STOP
once the MAG GETS COCKED, your crew's a Facebook pic, everyone gets TAGGED IN ONE SHOT

:laughing:
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Re: Good Punch?

Postby Emadyville » Oct 18th, '10, 22:34

mcZu wrote:^No shit, he was mocking you..


:laughing:
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Re: Good Punch?

Postby J Roc » Oct 18th, '10, 22:38

mocking me cuz he cant write a decent punchline? lmaooo

Haters wanna be me.
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Re: Good Punch?

Postby Solace » Oct 18th, '10, 22:45

You from heaven aint you?
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Re: Good Punch?

Postby J Roc » Oct 18th, '10, 22:50

Solace wrote:You from heaven aint you?


I'm god's son.

Stavros see's my punchlines and secretly envy's me.

He wrote that bar hoping he'd get the responses i get.

He got butthurt when his role model dis-owned him and owned him in this thread.

Sorry stavros, your gonna get even more pissy when i win that tournament you just signed up for.

Without a shadow of a doubt.
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Re: Good Punch?

Postby Solace » Oct 18th, '10, 22:51

How come your spelling got so good lately, Brendan?
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Re: Good Punch?

Postby J Roc » Oct 18th, '10, 22:53

Solace wrote:How come your spelling got so good lately, Brendan?


My spelling was always god-like, omar.
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