Lead My Way (Run This Town Remix)

[MakaveliTheDon]

A song I did a long ass time ago. But, I improved it dramatically by changing about half of the song including the hook.

Beat: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nXQV_Ii7 ... re=related

[Verse 1]
The only fucking reason I give it my all on every track,
It's just cause of this one very terrifying scary fact,
If I don't make it in rap find me on a corner selling crack,
Dwelling that my life could've been great, but hell is back,
To just sit and watch stare as he know my soul's not there,
No I didn't sell it, how dare you, I will never be caught bare,
This is no fake, mock swear, man I refuse to sign a contract,
This paper screaming at me, it's saying "it's time to combat",
Assign my bomp raps at the masses, I'm his rhyming comrad,
So I sign it and become a puppet to later be sighing on raps,
That's why, strangely, I rather be independent like Tech N9ne,
Instead of being expressionless all around like a dead mime,
No one really appreciates talent so I'm standing now for those,
With knowledge who never could start mapping out they flows,
And I wanted to be mainstream, but truly it's all a fake scene,
I know that every young, talented rapper had the same dream but....

[Hook]
I'm a soldier, I'm a warrior, I'm a leader,
You don't know me, so dig a lot deeper,
If there's two roads I just make another,
I'm a general not a fighter or a lover, (but)
I'm so tired of...,
No one helping me with nothing,
I'm so tired of...,
Having to lead my way alone,

[Verse 2]
It's difficult with the pressure to be successful in our society,
In that case it'll be my pleasure to bring some variety,
We need controversial people but it hurts you people,
To see uniqueness cause y'all jerks is see through,
But, here I am so burn me but it's impossible to turn me,
Into something I am not, so I'll say this once and sternly,
If you see me in college, tryna get a degree to polish,
Smack me cause I'ma be an emcee with a CD so flawless,
Totally wiping out and sniping out anything damaging,
You fuck with what I love and I turn into a savage being,
I truly understand what this sacred hip-hop shit means,
When I rap I spit me but people with trick schemes,
Say it's all gon' come true, you believe and dumb you,
Now where you gon' run to?, later on you succumb to,
Depression as your rap dream has turned to fine ashes,
Truth is no one cares, guess we all learn as time passes,

[Hook]
I'm a soldier, I'm a warrior, I'm a leader,
You don't know me, so dig a lot deeper,
If there's two roads I just make another,
I'm a general not a fighter or a lover, (but)
I'm so tired of...,
No one helping me with nothing,
I'm so tired of...,
Having to lead my way alone,

[Bridge]
Only the strong, won't become insane,
Only the rebellious, won't follow your lane,
Only the positives, know it's not in vain,
Only I know this...I will never change,

[Verse 3]
I've been told that I'm intelligent and I shouldn't waste it,
And that I should face it, that fame, I'll never taste it,
But, I know that inside me is a frustrated, hungry lion,
Yo, no need for lying, you'll see tears from me crying,
Because behind my anger is a kid that's gone through it,
Sadly, no one can soode it, except this hip-hop music,
I strive to be best believe, writing is my stress relief,
You damn right I'm not a gangsta that reps the streets,
I think I am the best and if I'm not, I'll still yell it out,
And if I make it as one of the best, I ain't selling out,
Because I truly enjoy and love doing what I do daily,
It made me zany, people say, "fuck why you crazy"?,
How can your raps and your mind be this demented,
Hip-hop corrupted me, I ment it, I ain't pretend this,
A strange connection making me love this madness,
That's when I see all this bullshit, I fucking spaz, shit!,
I wanna murk, hurt, to me now it's worth it to murder,
Y'all are fucking up the game for us damn hard workers,
Though if you bring me some fire arms I'll smile a bit,
I don't need a shotgun for it to get fouled out and sick,
You want real music? stay close to the rap underground,
I'll beat the fuck out of you if you say I lack hunger pal,
Leave eyes wide open, people won't nap, slumber, now...
Please applaud this raw truth 'til you clap thunder, PLOW!,

[Hook]x2
I'm a soldier, I'm a warrior, I'm a leader,
You don't know me, so dig a lot deeper,
If there's two roads I just make another,
I'm a general not a fighter or a lover, (but)
I'm so tired of...,
No one helping me with nothing,
I'm so tired of...,
Having to lead my way all alone,

Feedback: viewtopic.php?f=24&t=100047

[MakaveliTheDon]

bumping.

[ilovebender.com]

A song I did a long ass time ago. But, I improved it dramatically by changing about half of the song including the hook.

Beat: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nXQV_Ii7 ... re=related

[Verse 1]
The only fucking reason I give it my all on every track,
It's just cause of this one very terrifying scary fact,
If I don't make it in rap find me on a corner selling crack,
Dwelling that my life could've been great, but hell is back,
To just sit and watch stare as he know my soul's not there,
No I didn't sell it, how dare you, I will never be caught bare,
This is no fake, mock swear, man I refuse to sign a contract,
This paper screaming at me, it's saying "it's time to combat",
Assign my bomp raps at the masses, I'm his rhyming comrad,
So I sign it and become a puppet to later be sighing on raps,
That's why, strangely, I rather be independent like Tech N9ne,
Instead of being expressionless all around like a dead mime,
No one really appreciates talent so I'm standing now for those,
With knowledge who never could start mapping out they flows,
And I wanted to be mainstream, but truly it's all a fake scene,
I know that every young, talented rapper had the same dream but....

[Hook]
I'm a soldier, I'm a warrior, I'm a leader,
You don't know me, so dig a lot deeper,
If there's two roads I just make another,
I'm a general not a fighter or a lover, (but)
I'm so tired of...,
No one helping me with nothing,
I'm so tired of...,
Having to lead my way alone,

[Verse 2]
It's difficult with the pressure to be successful in our society,
In that case it'll be my pleasure to bring some variety,
We need controversial people but it hurts you people,
To see uniqueness cause y'all jerks is see through,
But, here I am so burn me but it's impossible to turn me,
Into something I am not, so I'll say this once and sternly,
If you see me in college, tryna get a degree to polish,
Smack me cause I'ma be an emcee with a CD so flawless,
Totally wiping out and sniping out anything damaging,
You fuck with what I love and I turn into a savage being,
I truly understand what this sacred hip-hop shit means,
When I rap I spit me but people with trick schemes,
Say it's all gon' come true, you believe and dumb you,
Now where you gon' run to?, later on you succumb to,
Depression as your rap dream has turned to fine ashes,
Truth is no one cares, guess we all learn as time passes,

[Hook]
I'm a soldier, I'm a warrior, I'm a leader,
You don't know me, so dig a lot deeper,
If there's two roads I just make another,
I'm a general not a fighter or a lover, (but)
I'm so tired of...,
No one helping me with nothing,
I'm so tired of...,
Having to lead my way alone,

[Bridge]
Only the strong, won't become insane,
Only the rebellious, won't follow your lane,
Only the positives, know it's not in vain,
Only I know this...I will never change,

[Verse 3]
I've been told that I'm intelligent and I shouldn't waste it,
And that I should face it, that fame, I'll never taste it,
But, I know that inside me is a frustrated, hungry lion,
Yo, no need for lying, you'll see tears from me crying,
Because behind my anger is a kid that's gone through it,
Sadly, no one can soode it, except this hip-hop music,
I strive to be best believe, writing is my stress relief,
You damn right I'm not a gangsta that reps the streets,
I think I am the best and if I'm not, I'll still yell it out,
And if I make it as one of the best, I ain't selling out,
Because I truly enjoy and love doing what I do daily,
It made me zany, people say, "fuck why you crazy"?,
How can your raps and your mind be this demented,
Hip-hop corrupted me, I ment it, I ain't pretend this,
A strange connection making me love this madness,
That's when I see all this bullshit, I fucking spaz, shit!,
I wanna murk, hurt, to me now it's worth it to murder,
Y'all are fucking up the game for us damn hard workers,
Though if you bring me some fire arms I'll smile a bit,
I don't need a shotgun for it to get fouled out and sick,
You want real music? stay close to the rap underground,
I'll beat the fuck out of you if you say I lack hunger pal,
Leave eyes wide open, people won't nap, slumber, now...
Please applaud this raw truth 'til you clap thunder, PLOW!,

[Hook]x2
I'm a soldier, I'm a warrior, I'm a leader,
You don't know me, so dig a lot deeper,
If there's two roads I just make another,
I'm a general not a fighter or a lover, (but)
I'm so tired of...,
No one helping me with nothing,
I'm so tired of...,
Having to lead my way all alone,

Feedback: viewtopic.php?f=24&t=100047

I'm not going to feed this for anything I'm going to write... I'm going to feed this because I like it.
Liked this song.

[MakaveliTheDon]

...

[classthe_king]

This was really good man, seriously. I loved the message you had with it and you had some really good rhymes in there. How old are you now, 14 or 15? Regardless it's impressive for someone that young. If you keep working hard and keep this frame of mind you could be good as fuck one day. If you have an msn or anything pm me it

[MakaveliTheDon]

This was really good man, seriously. I loved the message you had with it and you had some really good rhymes in there. How old are you now, 14 or 15? Regardless it's impressive for someone that young. If you keep working hard and keep this frame of mind you could be good as fuck one day. If you have an msn or anything pm me it

Yeah I'm 15.

Thanks Class I appreciate it, it means a lot to me I'll get at you with my msn right now

[Bistnal]

Didn't know you write. This was actually pretty good, I enjoyed it. Liked the rebellious kind of idea you had going there. Good job.

[MakaveliTheDon]

Thanks Bis

[MakaveliTheDon]

Thank you Miss 08

[MakaveliTheDon]

last bump.