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Spaz Out...16 Bars.

Postby MakaveliTheDon » Oct 19th, '10, 00:56

This is what came out of listening to Budden and Royce so yeah that's the meaning behind the punchlines. No instrumental on this one.

I dislike letters they limit me, fuck the alphabet,
Lively enough to shut down xbox and rile the dead,
I'm a neanderthal illiterately but I'm skilled lyrically,
Who's got dreams of Freddy Crueger still fearing me,
I always destroy a street or a beat to get joy in me,
But I pissed off like a missed the fucking toilet seat,
I enjoy leaving little rappers wheezing like Wayne,
Yeah, I kill top emcess but I'm only teasing the game,
Not reaching the fame like Gaga's album on a buildin',
Savage murder, god hanged is an outcome of a killin',
If I see a chick with a banging behind I harass her ass,
'Til my dick is up her neck like sex with girafes, perhaps?
I'm addicted, I smoke fags like homophobes with guns,
Every single chick is a slut, only no blow hoes are nuns,
I always be spazzing out like a hornet trapped in a cup,
What can I say...my ass is dirty like a sat in the mud,

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Far, far away from here (and nothin' I can do about it)
Everything I love go away from here (I'm wishin I could do without it)
Far, far away from here (and nothin' I can do about it)
Everything I love go away from here (I'm wishin I could do without it)


- Far Away, Tech N9ne And Krizz Kaliko
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Re: Spaz Out...16 Bars.

Postby Just Silver » Oct 19th, '10, 01:04

This is what i like to say plain and simple bars
Really enjoyed it flow is nice and this is the first piece iv'e seen from you keep it up
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Re: Spaz Out...16 Bars.

Postby MakaveliTheDon » Oct 19th, '10, 01:11

Thanks for the feed Silver :happy:
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Far, far away from here (and nothin' I can do about it)
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Re: Spaz Out...16 Bars.

Postby classthe_king » Oct 19th, '10, 02:37

I liked the pissed off line
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Re: Spaz Out...16 Bars.

Postby MakaveliTheDon » Oct 19th, '10, 02:43

My fav line too :happy:

Thanks Class :y:
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Far, far away from here (and nothin' I can do about it)
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Re: Spaz Out...16 Bars.

Postby classthe_king » Oct 19th, '10, 02:44

We need to collab
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Re: Spaz Out...16 Bars.

Postby MakaveliTheDon » Oct 19th, '10, 02:50

classthe_king wrote:We need to collab

Anytime. I'm down whenever you are.
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Re: Spaz Out...16 Bars.

Postby classthe_king » Oct 19th, '10, 02:53

MakaveliTheDon wrote:
classthe_king wrote:We need to collab

Anytime. I'm down whenever you are.


Well I'm working on something right now but when I'm done with that I'll hit you up with a verse.
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Re: Spaz Out...16 Bars.

Postby MakaveliTheDon » Oct 19th, '10, 03:00

Alright. I got ya.
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Far, far away from here (and nothin' I can do about it)
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