My Hiatus

by **Just Silver** » Oct 19th, '10, 03:43

viewtopic.php?f=24&t=100246 FEEDBACK

The beat in my head was Bury Me A G- Young Jeezy

It wasn't me I had skills I know
I felt everything that I did was broke
So I, examined and just placed it back
I felt, I need time and wasn't placed in rap
So i paced and paced and took some naps
Took some drinks damn near collapsed
Scripts and scraps considered it crap
Flushed in drains away from the shit that I lack
I need something or anything
Comfort from better green
Burn haze and kush combined with amphetamines
For new ideas hopes and dreams
Door opening new scope of things
How I cope with things seems unreal
Its how I know I mean every line that I kill
Rhyming with skill yet im aside from the hills
Realized im a guy with some guts to go spill
But enough this is real, limelight with the peels
Rhyme tight and you will, Be achieving a mill
Im decent and still ill be receiving some filth
On how i can't flow and just give up
Even though I rushed that stuff
I felt it was enough, even though it was rough
So fuck you too and Youtube
Im gonna sharpen my skills to skewer you

by **Fa-Q** » Oct 19th, '10, 18:41

good drop, I sense Wiz's style coming through....aint a bad thing though :8)

by **Just Silver** » Oct 19th, '10, 18:55

Fa-Q wrote:good drop, I sense Wiz's style coming through....aint a bad thing though

Lol yea i guess
Some dickhead on youtube somehow got to me on an off the top video

Now im back though for a while :8)

by **ilovebender.com** » Oct 20th, '10, 04:35

Just Silver wrote:http://forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=24&t=100246 FEEDBACK

The beat in my head was Bury Me A G- Young Jeezy

It wasn't me I had skills I know
I felt everything that I did was broke
So I, examined and just placed it back
I felt, I need time and wasn't placed in rap
So i paced and paced and took some naps
Took some drinks damn near collapsed
Scripts and scraps considered it crap
Flushed in drains away from the shit that I lack
I need something or anything
Comfort from better green
Burn haze and kush combined with amphetamines
For new ideas hopes and dreams
Door opening new scope of things
How I cope with things seems unreal
Its how I know I mean every line that I kill
Rhyming with skill yet im aside from the hills
Realized im a guy with some guts to go spill
But enough this is real, limelight with the peels
Rhyme tight and you will, Be achieving a mill
Im decent and still ill be receiving some filth
On how i can't flow and just give up
Even though I rushed that stuff
I felt it was enough, even though it was rough
So fuck you too and Youtube
Im gonna sharpen my skills to skewer you