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My Joe Budden Impression

Postby Stavros » Oct 20th, '10, 04:00

FEED: McZu - Untitled

Had a punch that sounded like one of his and a few other lines so I made him a song.

People telling me Joe you just ain't get the picture
So I gave in and signed up for a account on Flickr
They said I was closer, but the image was bigger
I switched my shit to iMAX but nothing got clearer
In front my sclera, everything just got cornea
A buncha mic thugs claiming they gon slaughter ya
Braggin bout they chain, how they all hard and shit
Bad music, but it's pretty good marketing
So they abused it and sold it to an audience
No punchlines just gimmik, wit gettin dull as shit
But pardon me, I won't dull my style for theatrics
Or bow to a label and get Diddy on my ad libs
This game's a matress, you're Cain an they're Abel
Sleep on em and don't ever try an fuck with a label
Put food on the table, don't fuck with a snake's food
I'd rather starve, than have an A&R at the same table
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Re: My Joe Budden Impression

Postby ilovebender.com » Oct 20th, '10, 04:24

Stavros wrote:FEED: McZu - Untitled

Had a punch that sounded like one of his and a few other lines so I made him a song.

People telling me Joe you just ain't get the picture
So I gave in and signed up for a account on Flickr
They said I was closer, but the image was bigger
I switched my shit to iMAX but nothing got clearer
In front my sclera, everything just got cornea
A buncha mic thugs claiming they gon slaughter ya
Braggin bout they chain, how they all hard and shit
Bad music, but it's pretty good marketing
So they abused it and sold it to an audience
No punchlines just gimmik, wit gettin dull as shit
But pardon me, I won't dull my style for theatrics
Or bow to a label and get Diddy on my ad libs
This game's a matress, you're Cain an they're Abel
Sleep on em and don't ever try an fuck with a label
Put food on the table, don't fuck with a snake's food
I'd rather starve, than have an A&R at the same table

So... You're name is Joe, you're a film maker or something, you got mugged, you used it to fuel your art and you don't really care for big labels anymore, you just want to make a living, is that correct? - If you wrote that from life that is.

It's alright still. :y:
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Re: My Joe Budden Impression

Postby Stavros » Oct 20th, '10, 04:28

ilovebender.com wrote:
Stavros wrote:FEED: McZu - Untitled

Had a punch that sounded like one of his and a few other lines so I made him a song.

People telling me Joe you just ain't get the picture
So I gave in and signed up for a account on Flickr
They said I was closer, but the image was bigger
I switched my shit to iMAX but nothing got clearer
In front my sclera, everything just got cornea
A buncha mic thugs claiming they gon slaughter ya
Braggin bout they chain, how they all hard and shit
Bad music, but it's pretty good marketing
So they abused it and sold it to an audience
No punchlines just gimmik, wit gettin dull as shit
But pardon me, I won't dull my style for theatrics
Or bow to a label and get Diddy on my ad libs
This game's a matress, you're Cain an they're Abel
Sleep on em and don't ever try an fuck with a label
Put food on the table, don't fuck with a snake's food
I'd rather starve, than have an A&R at the same table

So... You're name is Joe, you're a film maker or something, you got mugged, you used it to fuel your art and you don't really care for big labels anymore, you just want to make a living, is that correct? - If you wrote that from life that is.

It's alright still. :y:

Wow. That's exactly right.
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Re: My Joe Budden Impression

Postby ilovebender.com » Oct 20th, '10, 05:03

are you being sarcastic lol?

Sorry, I dunno though, so... yea... What I said^ lol.
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Re: My Joe Budden Impression

Postby Stavros » Oct 20th, '10, 05:15

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^ There's the point


















































































































































































































































































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^You are here
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Re: My Joe Budden Impression

Postby ilovebender.com » Oct 20th, '10, 05:33

Is that a good thing?

I doubt it though.

I guess that was a rhetorical question I just asked.
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Re: My Joe Budden Impression

Postby Stavros » Oct 20th, '10, 12:26

Miss'08 wrote:lol @ comments :happy:

Overall nice :y:
In the beginning you give the impression tht you don't get the picture and nothings clear.
and you say
"In front my sclera, everything just got cornea"
I would rather say "In front my cornea, everything just got sclera" if I'm trying to say that everything seems unclear etc.
cuz the cornea helps the eye focus, and the sclera's just the white part of the eye.

But I could be wrong. Maybe you ment that suddenly everything got clear.

correct me if I'm wrong. I dunno it's just a minor detail

"cornea/cornier" lmao
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Re: My Joe Budden Impression

Postby Mr. Chambers » Oct 20th, '10, 16:19

Stavros wrote:.
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^You are here

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Re: My Joe Budden Impression

Postby Just Silver » Oct 21st, '10, 01:22

Very Impressive for just starting out

Well on TR for posts at least.. Nice Punches and Overall Piece 9/10
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