I don't even know anymore... O.o

[ThomasJ]

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As I write this,I think about how my life is
They say it's priceless,well I won't charge it
So you or anyone else can take it away
What's the point anyway? No one asks me to stay
My back is in pain...the weight's too much
They say grow old,then die,but the wait's too much
And I'm facing such an amazing lust
To a girl,but it's mixed up,she became a slut
My parents,friends and relatives all careless when I shed a tear
The prejudices get to me,but it's evident I'll never be
The man they wanted me to become,so I guess
This is the end of the journey,medics came with a gurney
But it's too late,and the man you all knew til tonight
Is just a letter in the book of the Almighty God

I don't know why I wrote this,I just did...

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[ilovebender.com]

BEAT

As I write this,I think about how my life is
They say it's priceless,well I won't charge it
So you or anyone else can take it away
What's the point anyway? No one asks me to stay
My back is in pain...the weight's too much
They say grow old,then die,but the wait's too much
And I'm facing such an amazing lust
To a girl,but it's mixed up,she became a slut
My parents,friends and relatives all careless when I shed a tear
The prejudices get to me,but it's evident I'll never be
The man they wanted me to become,so I guess
This is the end of the journey,medics came with a gurney
But it's too late,and the man you all knew til tonight
Is just a letter in the book of the Almighty God

I don't know why I wrote this,I just did...

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To be honest, I didn't listen to the beat on that url, but I liked your method with words and patterns and sounds and stuff, I like how it read.