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You won't know this place

Postby Rain Matrix » Oct 26th, '10, 11:16

everything I wanted was never Meant for Me
Eventually, I will become my own Enemy

torn between lonliness and Indecision
like a soldier who can't Begin his Mission

the raging flames all but Forced me to Hell
maybe that's why I'm at War with Myself

the numb man can't Ignore what he Felt
he hit rock bottom and Swore that he Fell

I'm falling in love with my Abandoned Heart
thoughts and memories rip this Man Apart

and now I'm an outsider in a Land so Dark
I just realized that I may have Ran too Far

if you find me, you won't Know this Place
I've been walking around like a Ghost for Days

nothing can save me from this Broken State
so just pretend that I was Supposed to Break
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Re: You won't know this place

Postby Fa-Q » Oct 26th, '10, 16:21

NB4C :whistle:
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Re: You won't know this place

Postby Mr. Chambers » Oct 26th, '10, 18:14

locked for no link of feedback. this is like the 4th song you've done this. from now on i will be deleting your threads if you do not comply.
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