Speaking for no reason

[Just Silver]

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The alphabets a show on stage
I could bet i could direct this word play
Rest then burn all day rest assured yall gay
Guess they say thats why i rap this way
With a grenade pin in my mouth ready to frag
Im steady with that and im Freddy mixed the Jack
Im fucked while I sight stare fall into a nightmare
Pop right into a dream cloud so hard knock all my teeth out
Time to re-route GPS and CD stressed
MP3 combined with weed and the rest is all compressed
Into breath ginsu flesh sharp with every given step
Indirect disrespect makes you seem much less a threat
And its yep to any answer you could guess
Fuck giving chance a test I run for miles
In my own rap piles rap sheets and raps on file
Intact all the while in digital space on sizzurp disgrace
What I get I will take, remake the reasons
Why you wanted beefin with parts of my thesis
Is just straight out of my reachin and i doubt that im speakin
..for any reason

[Just Silver]

bumpin

[Fa-Q]

You know what I liked about this piece most that's kind of an overlooked fact. Word choice, which is almost as important as word play. The words you chose gave it a specific and unique flow, very good "short" drop.

[Just Silver]

You know what I liked about this piece most that's kind of an overlooked fact. Word choice, which is almost as important as word play. The words you chose gave it a specific and unique flow, very good "short" drop.

honestly good feedback i've been trying to switch styles