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My 2008 Bet Cypher

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My 2008 Bet Cypher

Postby Just Silver » Nov 4th, '10, 23:05

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^^^ PEEP THIS :y:
(This shit never happened so i might as well post)


No ones got an iller flow
Your light weight like a pillow thrown
At a hyped state I write great, fill the zone
Here we go, since it goes me against foe
I just slit throats never mention whose "GOAT"
Because it isn't a "ritual" as an individual
Its music to the inner lobe give it up for bitter hope
Hell,Im killer dope, killing time I skipped "2009"
Thats why I pounce on these lines, panther pantin
An ounce of these rhymes cause "gamma" damage
So I go "hulk", sell in bulk on top of "green",..mulch
On top of things to do never cry and sulk
Try to play cards right even with no aces
Lie cheat and start fights even when on probation
This is for the hoes waitin and living like us
For anyone whose curious to be luxurious
Some are envious but in envy I will trust
Start with a shed and a truck and build up
Write live dreams and live the lipo scene
Bitches love their ,hygiene tv, HD widescreen
And by what i've seen, im taking second looks
Trying to write a second book and make a record hook
To actualize that now im back define fact
I got like nine gats in a shiny black strap
I don't use em' but don't lose'm
But if you end up in troops im juicing you fruits
Losing my smooth used to be calm in the booth
Now what do I do, now im anxious i swallow the tool
Pack heat in the backseat if you asked me
But if a cop cornered me he would need his warrant b
..So I just want to ride out with time slown
Just drink syrup when its bright out ...mind blown
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Re: My 2008 Bet Cypher

Postby ShaBruv » Nov 4th, '10, 23:14

Thanks for the shout out with the link, friend added :wub:

and yeah this is great, i enjoyed the hulk word play/punch

flow was tight and multi's were awesome

Well Played
I know you want to retaliate but you won't dare,
Cause you fuckin with some ****** like this who just don't care.

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Re: My 2008 Bet Cypher

Postby Just Silver » Nov 5th, '10, 23:06

bump :zipped:
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Re: My 2008 Bet Cypher

Postby Devil'sAdvocate » Nov 7th, '10, 18:30

this is very dope,i can really flow it well to a pure premier drums beat.
The devil ain't on a level same as him!
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Re: My 2008 Bet Cypher

Postby BILI » Nov 7th, '10, 20:11

Its really good man,flow was there,decent rhymes,etc...I see that you really improved since the last time I checked your drop...keep it up :y:
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Re: My 2008 Bet Cypher

Postby Just Silver » Nov 7th, '10, 21:24

BILI wrote:Its really good man,flow was there,decent rhymes,etc...I see that you really improved since the last time I checked your drop...keep it up :y:

Thanks guy :y:
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