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Love....(WOAH STEVEN ANOTHER VERSE???)

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Re: Love....(WOAH STEVEN ANOTHER VERSE???)

Postby Devil'sAdvocate » Nov 5th, '10, 17:29

nice verse
The devil ain't on a level same as him!
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Re: Love....(WOAH STEVEN ANOTHER VERSE???)

Postby iluveminem » Nov 5th, '10, 17:49

Devil'sAdvocate wrote:nice verse

what he said
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Nobody Dies a virign, in the end life fucks us all!
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Re: Love....(WOAH STEVEN ANOTHER VERSE???)

Postby classthe_king » Nov 5th, '10, 19:45

I thought this was good my man, you have good thoughts you have relateable lines. Only thing I'm goona say though is multis my man. Just try and write a 16 with nothing but 3 syllable multis as every rhyme and see how that turns out.
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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