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Re: The Devil On My Sholder ( Please Feed )

Postby DƎRDYPK » Nov 8th, '10, 21:33

I like it Steve
real good stuff compared to what you 1st did when you showed up in CW
but this is real good.
keep putting in work & take it easy my wiqqa
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Re: The Devil On My Sholder ( Please Feed )

Postby iluveminem » Nov 9th, '10, 15:18

I loved it! Nice verse!
I love you Steve!
Emo 4 life!
Nobody Dies a virign, in the end life fucks us all!
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Re: The Devil On My Sholder ( Please Feed )

Postby Devil'sAdvocate » Nov 9th, '10, 20:17

Nigga,Love makin u go a lil soft,tell the bitch that she can get the dick.

nah bro,u know i love u,great emotional verse. :y: :flower:
The devil ain't on a level same as him!
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Re: The Devil On My Sholder ( Please Feed )

Postby DƎRDYPK » Nov 9th, '10, 20:18

iluveminem wrote:I love you Steve!


lay off my man bitch!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Re: The Devil On My Sholder ( Please Feed )

Postby iluveminem » Nov 9th, '10, 21:07

DƎRDYPK wrote:
iluveminem wrote:I love you Steve!


lay off my man bitch!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


fuck you! Literally.
I'm sorry, I love you derdy, and only you.
Emo 4 life!
Nobody Dies a virign, in the end life fucks us all!
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Re: The Devil On My Sholder ( Please Feed )

Postby DƎRDYPK » Nov 9th, '10, 21:10

iluveminem wrote:
DƎRDYPK wrote:
iluveminem wrote:I love you Steve!


lay off my man bitch!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


fuck you! Literally.
I'm sorry, I love you derdy, and only you.


damn straight :slut:
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