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[gutawafang]

As if the world's against my ass, everybody hates me bad
Expecting people to walk in my shoes, to relate to this crap
Like it will fucking happen, it's always a cruel world we live in
A perfect or fucked up world that everyone's soon be leaving
Misbelieving every word that you say to me that compliments
Cuz I know I suck like fucking vampires with no commitments
Am I to give a fuck if I die killed by werewolves?
Actually I'm a unicorn, it's just that I got bare hooves
So what do I do? Ignite it to take me to the scene of us?
I'm picturing our time together until we see the skin of us
It helps but suicide is a bad choice, fuck it, I'll still do it
Fuck, did I just write a line that rhymes and proves I'm stupid?
I guess I did, honestly, what do I do after my sweet escape?
It's still the same mind that's thinking I need to fix my brain
I'm gonna leave this place and leave it twisted and distorted
You'll forget me like I never existed nor respected

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[danielwang]

I like this sentence - 'You'll forget me like I never existed nor respected '

[Just Silver]

I liked the rhyme scheme and choice of words

Reminds me of something i would write

[Devil'sAdvocate]

nice peice bro

[BILI]

Guta still killing it .It was nice bro,few lines I could really dig.2nd line really got me into it.Just keep what you`re doing.

[gutawafang]

Lol i forgot bout this. Thank you so much everybody.

[Arabian Shady]

haha pretty good guta
dude youre writing has improved sooooooo much since i last read some of youre shit!
The change is dope man!
Give a brotha some love and leave feedback on mine aswell?

[gutawafang]

haha pretty good guta
dude youre writing has improved sooooooo much since i last read some of youre shit!
The change is dope man!
Give a brotha some love and leave feedback on mine aswell?

Man, thank you very much man! For real. Thanks.