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Unique Flow

Postby Just Silver » Nov 13th, '10, 18:27

viewtopic.php?f=24&t=102027<---- :flower: pEEp

I don't know just get the fuck out
Yes I know I took the tough route
Being blown is a must now
If I cut crowds i suppose tinted windows, and flows
Insoles crisp and so, pure white like disco snow
Highly unpredictable when i switch on go
I just sketch a foe I am impeccable
I am the best of those, honest statement
I smoke cess and no dro, a lotta hating
So iv'e gone debating whether more hate or love
If theres hate enough than my face will blush
Then I write and retrace my trust
I try to embrace it because
If I didn't I would be spitting with no name to come up
For that moment i would be my own opponent
Im zoned while im holding lists of my forum convulsions
remembering it was for the play and thoughts golden
Never thought I'd be able to top and have it not stolen
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Re: Unique Flow

Postby Just Silver » Nov 14th, '10, 21:41

bump :zipped:
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Re: Unique Flow

Postby Just Silver » Nov 16th, '10, 16:48

last bump :tounge2:
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Re: Unique Flow

Postby Sir_Machete' » Nov 16th, '10, 20:28

Good multi use homie, decent rhyme scheme not a bad little flow
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