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Allow Me To Re-Introduce Myself

Postby Spyder » Nov 19th, '10, 21:11

if rap is a 'game' you seriously dont think youd advance do you?
ill put these kids in "jeopardy askin question they know the answer to."
my vocal cords thunderous wonders, nobody spit as well
my LP "blow up stores" like my CDs "shoplift themsevles"
its Spyder, half taratntula part machanical man its C-3PO
silver tongued wizard refillin the tank, body of a GTO,
unbeatable, so dont try to diss me your heat is worthless
its my job to dodge your so called bullets... secret service.
i see ya verses kinda pathetic, shits a pitty man
but no matter how "bent i get ill always keep my shape, silly band"
y'all throwin rabbit punches, i make em to see ya duck funny
when i drive by youll see dudes get hit like a punch buggy,
fuck money my words are priceless, saucy, you speak mild things
i dont need to play, 'control the game from sidelines' like buffalo wild wings.
ready for my old reign, so behold while i control these bitches
my 'strength is godlike', like a 'jahovis witness doin explosive fitness'.
enjoy every moment in this insane life i live, and will til the coffin
cause when i get 'physical' aint no 'turn your head and coughin'.
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Re: Allow Me To Re-Introduce Myself

Postby DƎRDYPK » Nov 19th, '10, 21:18

lol welcome back is all I can say :happy:
nice to see you still got the rhymes flowing :boxing:
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Re: Allow Me To Re-Introduce Myself

Postby classthe_king » Nov 19th, '10, 21:21

It looked kinda rusty but I bet you haven't wrote in a while. Silly band line was tight :D

How long are you staying?
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: Allow Me To Re-Introduce Myself

Postby Sir_Machete' » Nov 19th, '10, 21:46

Favorite lines:

my vocal cords thunderous wonders, nobody spit as well
my LP "blow up stores" like my CDs "shoplift themsevles"
unbeatable, so dont try to diss me your heat is worthless
its my job to dodge your so called bullets... secret service.
ready for my old reign, so behold while i control these bitches
my 'strength is godlike', like a 'jahovis witness doin explosive fitness'.
enjoy every moment in this insane life i live, and will til the coffin
cause when i get 'physical' aint no 'turn your head and coughin'.

Not bad indeed, Self-hype aka Self glory type of verse... flow was mad dope, multies helped a lot... Cool meta's bro that made it punch'd nicely throughout ya bars. Overall 8.8/10 :y:
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Re: Allow Me To Re-Introduce Myself

Postby Xray » Nov 20th, '10, 04:48

unbeatable, so dont try to diss me your heat is worthless
its my job to dodge your so called bullets... secret service.


lol @ biting Diabolic.

But your preach is worthless, your worship defeats the purpose
Like President Bush taking bullets for the Secret Service
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Re: Allow Me To Re-Introduce Myself

Postby enjinn » Nov 20th, '10, 10:27

i like your aggressive style...you have some nice punchlines...dope
each one teaches one
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Re: Allow Me To Re-Introduce Myself

Postby Arabian Shady » Nov 20th, '10, 12:27

Aiyo the flow is dope man, i digg the metaphors and wordplays.
Glad to see you droppin in this part of the forum again, haha
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So when we face rage, Ya'll fake it and let THEM commit horrific crimes
50 years & going straight, Yet this performance aint worth your time,OUR
Shit is BACKSTAGE,Cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
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Re: Allow Me To Re-Introduce Myself

Postby Spyder » Nov 20th, '10, 21:44

shit dude i honestly never heard that line X dont listen to Diabolic :'(

and Class, ya thats literally my first verse in four months.
and im back periodically for a second
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Re: Allow Me To Re-Introduce Myself

Postby Xray » Nov 21st, '10, 05:27

Haha. Keep your head up homeboy, waiting on some proper Spyder shit. :smoking:
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Re: Allow Me To Re-Introduce Myself

Postby Yah-hah » Nov 21st, '10, 06:52

That Jepardy punchline was pretty dope man. Glad to see an old cat bringin some heat. Punches were dope, multis on point, Spyder makin a comeback :y:
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With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
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Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Allow Me To Re-Introduce Myself

Postby Slim Zaddy » Nov 21st, '10, 11:14

ohhh, long time , but here i am ,, nice shit bro,, not as the shit i have seen from you before ,, those were so dope ,, but this had a good rhyming ,,complex, sound nice,, keep it up bro ,, :y:
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