S a double J

[Xray]

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hook
I feel so fuckin lonely
it's like my life ran from me
If only you would kill me
cause only you can heal me
Devil I love you give me
your soul your heart your energy
Temper I need you daily
You make my life so easy

verse
Im like a horoscope givin people sick dreams
They call it deathstroke way I kill these sixteens
Im fulla trouble though in your fuckin wet jeans
Plus these bitches know how they fuckin get creamed
Give you comatose, blows on your dead clothes
Bustin on your eye holes bigger than a stadium
I hold you close and choke your throat with opium
Play wid dem, rapin' em, you faggot like napoleon
Addressin like a podium, throwin fingers like Eminem
Makin disses with sodium, my insult bury many men
You can't temper with hell when heaven breaks you
Throw you in the world and you still gettin burned through
I'm Aries ramming through emcees
Your flow ass like you just ate baked beans
Sajjad motherfucker leaving you with questions
And if you want it motherfucker come and test him

[classthe_king]

This was pretty sick man. The only line I didn't really get was the dead clothes line because it didn't really rhyme with anything so it just stood out for me and sounded weird. But other than that everything sounded dope, another dope song for your highly anticipated tape

[Just Silver]

Sick flow im and its sick
9/10
keep up this type'a shit

[Devil'sAdvocate]

DOPE AS FUCK

[Arabian Shady]

Aiyo just seen this, sorry!
This is tite man, flow is dope! like usually youre shit doesnt flow on paper, but i can hear you do dat shit in my mind man!
Lyrics were random, i dunno what the topic was about but its TYPICAL sajjad
LMAO!
Good shit
PEACE!

[Audi]

Im like a horoscope givin people sick dreams
Horoscopes don't give people sick dreams
They call it deathstroke way I kill these sixteens
Sacrificed a set up for a weak punch
Im fulla trouble though in your fuckin wet jeans
I don't even wear jeans
Plus these bitches know how they fuckin get creamed
How?
Give you comatose, blows on your dead clothes
You can put me in comatose, can't really give me one.
My clothes are dead? I need some live ones ASAP
Bustin on your eye holes bigger than a stadium
That doesn't even make sense
I hold you close and choke your throat with opium
Akward
Play wid dem, rapin' em, you faggot like napoleon
Napoleon wasn't a faggot
Addressin like a podium, throwin fingers like Eminem
Weakness
Makin disses with sodium, my insult bury many men
Nonsensical.
You can't temper with hell when heaven breaks you
Why not?
Throw you in the world and you still gettin burned through
Unexplained.
I'm Aries ramming through emcees
Egyptian astrology? How original.
Your flow ass like you just ate baked beans
Worst punch ever written.
Sajjad motherfucker leaving you with questions
I have none.
And if you want it motherfucker come and test him
Alright.

[Xray]

Dumbest feedback ever. But really now? And I'm the butthurt one? Haha. This verse was wack as shit and I'll never deny that. Just a bad time for creativity, I'll show you soon haha.

[Audi]

I kinda stayed up all night last night and it turned me into a moody bastard. I'm usually pretty humble towards feed, it just struck a chord with me. That's all.