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Time For A Change

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Time For A Change

Postby toxicbuffy » Nov 21st, '10, 19:39

Ive got all the tools to make it in this cruel world
Waiting for all the answers to be unfurled
Praying to god to give me strength to figure out some solutions
im tired of living in these dreams that are just dilusions.

Thinking back of the days i use to be full of life
Had so many plans, i was going to be the best wife
but you decided to pull my heart out and stab it with a knife
Forcing Me to live my life And everyday go through strife

Everyday i wake up, hoping things will change
All these thoughts are leaving me empty and deranged
its all eating me up inside,
the thoughts lying in my mind.


My life is openly plain
sometimes i just wanna Throw it away
Or disguise it a bit And coat it with Paint
I know i aint no saint,
all im looking for is happiness,
the one thing i cant acquaint


My life is like one big wall,
it keeps stumbling down,
yet i keep bulding it up tall.
I know i will never fall

Even tho these days are so long
i know one day i will belong
and i will learn how to grow strong
i will be the greatest,just like king kong

Until then imma try to stay positive
and im going to add a bit of causative
because i know life has its bad times
and that its normal to feel sad sometimes

So starting today im going to change my ways
no longer sitting around here, wasting my days
im going to shoot for the stars, and amaze,
and fight this battle, ill be the most comprehensive


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Re: Time For A Change

Postby BILI » Nov 21st, '10, 19:45

I love it,emotions are there and thats actually what counts :worship:

My life is openly plain
sometimes i just wanna Throw it away
Or disguise it a bit And coat it with Paint
I know i aint no saint,
all im looking for is happiness,
the one thing i cant acquaint


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Re: Time For A Change

Postby toxicbuffy » Nov 21st, '10, 19:47

BILI wrote:I love it,emotions are there and thats actually what counts :worship:

My life is openly plain
sometimes i just wanna Throw it away
Or disguise it a bit And coat it with Paint
I know i aint no saint,
all im looking for is happiness,
the one thing i cant acquaint


my fav part


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Re: Time For A Change

Postby BILI » Nov 21st, '10, 19:48

toxicbuffy wrote:
BILI wrote:I love it,emotions are there and thats actually what counts :worship:

My life is openly plain
sometimes i just wanna Throw it away
Or disguise it a bit And coat it with Paint
I know i aint no saint,
all im looking for is happiness,
the one thing i cant acquaint


my fav part


Our Poem is Going To Be Better (H)

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Re: Time For A Change

Postby Arabian Shady » Nov 21st, '10, 20:02

That was some real shit!
I know its not rap, but i really like meaning to anything written, and you really put quite alot in there
Good job miss!
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So when we face rage, Ya'll fake it and let THEM commit horrific crimes
50 years & going straight, Yet this performance aint worth your time,OUR
Shit is BACKSTAGE,Cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
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Re: Time For A Change

Postby toxicbuffy » Nov 21st, '10, 20:04

Arabian Shady wrote:That was some real shit!
I know its not rap, but i really like meaning to anything written, and you really put quite alot in there
Good job miss!


Thank Youuu !!!! :D :D
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