420 Bars pt.8

[Just Silver]

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Close to the end need clothes and trends
Unfold a benz like a box im bent
The shocks alone could need rent
I'll shock you all in attempts
Not even once full bars like im charging the shit
You are as far as it gets from a car to a tent
Anybody gets the deal no "cuts" justs slits
I must go get, a little quicker rapid
Its picked up like im drafted
I fit what raps with. facts as in
Arachnids combat with how "fly" I acted
But Im fly in fact kid, so try and go get combatants
Attach with a match that seems simple to win
Im close like pimples and skin let me heat up a pen
And sink it to paper, maybe think of it later
But send it right now I have a pen to write down
Light blue lines spark new rhymes
They're in new light but not considered what you like
Im fit in the types of writers tight as a "vice"
No city or president go pity my arrogance
Last thing i do, take a trip to the ambulance

[Sir_Machete']

the flow wasn't bad, decent 420 bars

[Ka0t1c]

they're ok, some things you wrote were very good tho.

[Just Silver]

thanks for the feed

[Just Silver]

bumppp