UPDATED: In The Morning Freestyle Ft ENIMEE

[Enimee]

definitly hot dude i really enjoyed this, two double thumbs up, plus 1 times 2, hot shit man

[Arabian Shady]

Sorry for not replying earlier.

This was pretty nice man. It's song worthy stuff. Only thing I can say is, some lines didn't feel like they were thought out enough, some lines had too many syllables and it was akward to flow it. Does this have a fast flow? Cause the structure isn't great, I can see a lot of breathing problems recording this, unless you have Eminem's lungs lol. Anyways, you should write more, I see you're taking a lot of breaks here and there from writing, this will cost you, and take you more time to get better. WHENEVER you free, just practice, I know you got a busy schedule, but work harder in finding time.

haha its all good man,
Well it flows smooth for me, umm i dont smoke so i have a better lung capacity :P maybe i can do it for you. But yes you ARE right, some lines i have to speed up abnormally, its definately because of the structure, but then again i wrote it after wakin up in the middle of the night. LITERALLY. i was sleepin and like my mind was restless so i woke up and penned it out-ON MY I PHONE. and i just copy pasted it from there,lol
Thank your brotha for checkin it out, and woord, ima start workin on it a lil more

definitly hot dude i really enjoyed this, two double thumbs up, plus 1 times 2, hot shit man

hahahaha, ayy man, thanks B, you know how i feel about it, im waitin on YOU right now :P