Did yall miss me? Well the King is back

[classthe_king]

This is why I'm the best.


I brawl with the best but if rhymes are borin ya
I’ll crawl from the depths of the Mines of Moria
With the kind of story ya couldn’t even imagine
Dedicated, nowadays if I’m breathin, I’m rappin
My legions of dragons rule with power and might
To devour the mic while all foes cower in fright
Get out of my site, about time your rappin’s close
To beatin me, but I still laugh at you asymptotes
No wonder when you freestyle you’re not inspired
I’m Mike with Pepsi; everything off the top is fire
You should just stop, retire, don’t fight with me
You’re good but drop an O and you’re describing me
I grind my teeth and slash with my vicious claws
Spit ash from malicious maws as just the sickest yall
Ever have seen, to be honest you sicken me
Mrs. Johnny Storm in labour, got the hottest delivery

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[Fa-Q]

Multis great drop!!! Sentus is back, huh?

[Slim's Shady]

5 syllable multi on the first two lines

[classthe_king]

Yepp Fa-Q

5 syllable multi on the first two lines

Try again buddy

[Solace]

5 syllable multi on the first two lines

I'd count it as 13 syllables.

Actually a really sick verse, glad you got that hottest delivery line done haha.

[Slim's Shady]

Yepp Fa-Q

5 syllable multi on the first two lines

Try again buddy

Smh i thought boring ya/Moria were two syllables.

6 syllable multi

Anyway nice, random drop, my man

[classthe_king]

Yepp Fa-Q

5 syllable multi on the first two lines

Try again buddy

Smh i thought boring ya/Moria were two syllables.

6 syllable multi

Anyway nice, random drop, my man

Keep trying

[Slim's Shady]

13 syllable?

[classthe_king]

13 syllable?

There you go *Claps*

[WakeUpShow]

it was decent

[classthe_king]

Thanks Geno

Cosh tries to pretend like he doesn't like me but he knows this was hot.

[MikeNUFC]

Really impressive - first rhyme is immense.

Only criticism would be that this rhyme was kinda forced (just the y'all on the end)

I grind my teeth and slash with my vicious claws
Spit ash from malicious maws as just the sickest yall

I like the use of the word 'maws' though.

[DƎRDYPK]

good stuff bruh
I think you could help me & anonymous write the Rhyma Lions bible

[classthe_king]

Really impressive - first rhyme is immense.

Only criticism would be that this rhyme was kinda forced (just the y'all on the end)

I grind my teeth and slash with my vicious claws
Spit ash from malicious maws as just the sickest yall

I like the use of the word 'maws' though.

Thanks bro, when I rap it outloud I don't think it sounds that forced but trust me lol, I spent awhile last night trying to think of something better but I was getting tired so I just threw that in, maybe something better will come to me today.

[WakeUpShow]

Thanks Geno

Cosh tries to pretend like he doesn't like me but he knows this was hot.

yeah it was pretty good, a few of the lines were a little jumbled i think, didn't rhyme well. I really liked the last punchline.