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Re: Did yall miss me? Well the King is back

Postby Enimee » Nov 25th, '10, 22:13

fiyah, i thought like one line was rushed, but it started well, got kinda iffy and then it closed with a bang, very good drop :worship:
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Re: Did yall miss me? Well the King is back

Postby Block » Nov 25th, '10, 23:46

classthe_king wrote:Thanks Geno

Cosh tries to pretend like he doesn't like me but he knows this was hot.


The kid is a fucking homo bro.

This was good. I wish you posted a beat to it tho. The way I flowed it, you could use a few more syllables in some lines, but then again my flow is weird as hell
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Re: Did yall miss me? Well the King is back

Postby classthe_king » Nov 26th, '10, 02:09

Thanks everyone

k block wrote:
classthe_king wrote:Thanks Geno

Cosh tries to pretend like he doesn't like me but he knows this was hot.


The kid is a fucking homo bro.

This was good. I wish you posted a beat to it tho. The way I flowed it, you could use a few more syllables in some lines, but then again my flow is weird as hell


This is the beat I used
http://www.rockitpro.com/2008/11/07/final-rest/
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Re: Did yall miss me? Well the King is back

Postby WakeUpShow » Nov 26th, '10, 02:16

k block wrote:
classthe_king wrote:Thanks Geno

Cosh tries to pretend like he doesn't like me but he knows this was hot.


The kid is a fucking homo bro.

This was good. I wish you posted a beat to it tho. The way I flowed it, you could use a few more syllables in some lines, but then again my flow is weird as hell

God, I'm not even joking around anymore, you are legit on my dick.
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Re: Did yall miss me? Well the King is back

Postby ku53v » Nov 26th, '10, 05:46

Really good I gotta admit it.

Especially this bit

No wonder when you freestyle you’re not inspired
I’m Mike with Pepsi; everything off the top is fire
You should just stop, retire, don’t fight with me
You’re good but drop an O and you’re describing me
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Re: Did yall miss me? Well the King is back

Postby pile of matter » Nov 26th, '10, 06:13

classthe_king wrote:You’re good but drop an O and you’re describing me
http://www.forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=24&t=102649


Very very nice line, flow is great too by the way, i could spit it beatless easily :y:
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Re: Did yall miss me? Well the King is back

Postby Yah-hah » Nov 26th, '10, 17:57

I dug it nice punches with the multis. Some of the better multi displays I remember from you. That first bar was on some Vinnie Paz whole line rhymin shit haha sounded dope brother. Yo man I got a few days off this weekend for thanksgiving and all that and seein as how us three seems to have shaken that rust off............................................Black name collab?
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
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Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Did yall miss me? Well the King is back

Postby classthe_king » Nov 26th, '10, 18:07

Yah-hah wrote:I dug it nice punches with the multis. Some of the better multi displays I remember from you. That first bar was on some Vinnie Paz whole line rhymin shit haha sounded dope brother. Yo man I got a few days off this weekend for thanksgiving and all that and seein as how us three seems to have shaken that rust off............................................Black name collab?


Well we had a black name collab that was suppossed to happen like a month ago that me and Fa-Q wrote are verses for and you never did :angry:
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Re: Did yall miss me? Well the King is back

Postby Fa-Q » Nov 26th, '10, 18:10

classthe_king wrote:
Yah-hah wrote:I dug it nice punches with the multis. Some of the better multi displays I remember from you. That first bar was on some Vinnie Paz whole line rhymin shit haha sounded dope brother. Yo man I got a few days off this weekend for thanksgiving and all that and seein as how us three seems to have shaken that rust off............................................Black name collab?


Well we had a black name collab that was suppossed to happen like a month ago that me and Fa-Q wrote are verses for and you never did :angry:

haha yeah I just ended up posting it my verse :(
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Re: Did yall miss me? Well the King is back

Postby classthe_king » Nov 26th, '10, 18:17

I did too in that collab with Bili and Steven :(
http://www.forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=24&t=101819
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Re: Did yall miss me? Well the King is back

Postby Yah-hah » Nov 26th, '10, 18:26

Shit my bad guys :'( Got a new job I work 7 days a week 10 hour shift aint been on much. Ill have some shit probably by the end of the day if yall are cool
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

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Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Did yall miss me? Well the King is back

Postby classthe_king » Nov 26th, '10, 18:31

Yah-hah wrote:Shit my bad guys :'( Got a new job I work 7 days a week 10 hour shift aint been on much. Ill have some shit probably by the end of the day if yall are cool


Well hit me up with it. I'll get something done as soon as I can depending on how busy I am the next couple of days
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Re: Did yall miss me? Well the King is back

Postby BILI » Nov 26th, '10, 19:22

Its awesome class :worship:

Lovin that first bar
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Re: Did yall miss me? Well the King is back

Postby classthe_king » Nov 27th, '10, 06:14

Thanks my Man
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Re: Did yall miss me? Well the King is back

Postby Willy » Nov 27th, '10, 11:50

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