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Fa-Q - I Hear Them Calling feat. Yahhah

Postby Fa-Q » Nov 24th, '10, 13:22

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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=p97URlFlkis heres the beat I used


(YahHah)
I feel feeble and broken,
I'm a zombie that's evil and hopeless,
People keep chokin cause I'm lethal with no skin,
Reaper's still needing a rope then my body's seen decomposin,
My body knee-deep in rose stems to see how this pyro's gifted,
My addictions get mixed in with these hieroglyphics,
My head's heavy like wearin a fine-stone fitted,
They bought me a cheap casket so my spine won't fit in,
My rhymes won't fit aswell my lines have trippled sales,
The sick shit I spit'll make your spine brittle, frail,
My missles' shell flies and whistles well,
Blind crippled hell they can find sickle cell in your minds rippled shell,
I have a quarterbacks courage and this interception hurts,
Complete fire I'ma 60 second Smith and Wesson burst,
I run forever to the end of Earth until my tube socks break,
I live a boondock saint destined to feel Tupac's fate,
DO NOT WAIT, get caught relaxin when the whistle blows,
Ribs crack and snap from the impact of the initail blow,

(Fa-Q)
I’m always in rare form, you see that term’s good,
Until the world all dies from worm wood,
Until the shock waves wear off and we all have to battle God,
And he’s armed to the teeth, and all we have is a cattle prod,
And diehard fans await a return, their ready to clap,
With slander a snare, I cant handle their stair, they’re steady to trap,
I’m trapped in this obstacle course snare, with long horse hair,
Under the sun’s watch, I feel that’s not just a forced stare,
So I’ll fly with Aristotle’s flight, I now have wax wings,
The sky’s broken, and each of the crack’s sings,
Plus I’m out of lessons, I’m more than just adolescent,
I’m riding the apocalyptic horses, just on my saddle restin’
Each hoof has mushroom clouds, I’m on the lost ride,
I must be seeing Christ, because I’m found cross eyed,
So while I swim laps in the lakes of fire, I’ll find what makes a liar,
So now I no longer have a fear of falling, I hear them calling,
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Re: Fa-Q - I Hear Them Calling feat. Yahhah

Postby BILI » Nov 24th, '10, 13:53

Love it,you too guys work perfect together,both have dope multies.Nice drop man.
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Re: Fa-Q - I Hear Them Calling feat. Yahhah

Postby Arabian Shady » Nov 24th, '10, 20:48

FAQ is like multi's galore, like techincally youre pretty cool, i dunno about flow tho, i read it out loud-slow and fast and to ME it felt choppy, but it was dope
Yah is sick with the imagery, for real, in my opinion thats his stringhold, givin people images while you read 'em
Good drop brothas! Love readin collabs like these :y:
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We're all on the same page, Yet we're standing apart on different lines'
So when we face rage, Ya'll fake it and let THEM commit horrific crimes
50 years & going straight, Yet this performance aint worth your time,OUR
Shit is BACKSTAGE,Cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
"Front Page",Arabian Shady


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Re: Fa-Q - I Hear Them Calling feat. Yahhah

Postby Enimee » Nov 25th, '10, 00:27

wow that shit was fucking outstanding both of you real deep, and like A-S said the imagery was intense. yah i like ur shit homee and this is another great addition to your list of amazing drops man, the flow was ridiculous and every line put a smile on my face
fa-q you always come correct, and this drop defnitly wow'd me, it was so deep and personal and i really got stuck in the story behind it all

great work you two awesome collab :D :b: :y:
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Re: Fa-Q - I Hear Them Calling feat. Yahhah

Postby Fa-Q » Nov 25th, '10, 04:47

Thanks alot Bili, Enimee, and Arabian Shady!! :D
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Re: Fa-Q - I Hear Them Calling feat. Yahhah

Postby Fa-Q » Nov 25th, '10, 19:28

bumpin'
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Re: Fa-Q - I Hear Them Calling feat. Yahhah

Postby Sir_Machete' » Nov 25th, '10, 23:47

Favorite Lines:

My body knee-deep in rose stems to see how this pyro's gifted,
My addictions get mixed in with these hieroglyphics,
My head's heavy like wearin a fine-stone fitted,
They bought me a cheap casket so my spine won't fit in,
I run forever to the end of Earth until my tube socks break,
I live a boondock saint destined to feel Tupac's fate


So I’ll fly with Aristotle’s flight, I now have wax wings,
The sky’s broken, and each of the crack’s sings,
Each hoof has mushroom clouds, I’m on the lost ride,
I must be seeing Christ, because I’m found cross eyed,
So while I swim laps in the lakes of fire, I’ll find what makes a liar,


I felt Yahh had a very dope audio like flow, some meta's but damn the multies are just hot. Both had nice imagery in my opinion. As well Vocab. Faq you had good wordplay's and meta's bro, flow was a bit choppy but together the collabo was a solid piece. Overall 9/10 :y:
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Re: Fa-Q - I Hear Them Calling feat. Yahhah

Postby Fa-Q » Nov 26th, '10, 11:24

Thanks Machete :D
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Re: Fa-Q - I Hear Them Calling feat. Yahhah

Postby Yah-hah » Nov 26th, '10, 17:52

:worship: Lovin this shit. Yo I guess I never saw it before or somethin but this line
'I must be seeing Christ, because I’m found cross eyed' FUCKIN KILLS bro I read it and was like oh shit wait hahahahahah But yeah man thanks for the feed. One of my best flow wise. Lol two imagery kings :y:
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

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Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Fa-Q - I Hear Them Calling feat. Yahhah

Postby Fa-Q » Nov 26th, '10, 19:34

thanks Yah....I remember being extra jealous of your verse so I redid mine...it still falls short though, your verse is dope
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Postby Fa-Q » Nov 26th, '10, 22:43

bump :unsure:
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Re: Fa-Q - I Hear Them Calling feat. Yahhah

Postby Yah-hah » Nov 27th, '10, 17:49

Ya I was like when the fuck did I write that lmao still dope
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Fa-Q - I Hear Them Calling feat. Yahhah

Postby dR3 » Nov 27th, '10, 20:01

So I’ll fly with Aristotle’s flight, I now have wax wings


Icarus flew with wax wings, not Aristotle.
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Re: Fa-Q - I Hear Them Calling feat. Yahhah

Postby Fa-Q » Nov 27th, '10, 21:07

Damn you, Dre, and your extensive knowledge of history and mythology
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Re: Fa-Q - I Hear Them Calling feat. Yahhah

Postby classthe_king » Nov 27th, '10, 21:21

Aristotle was a philosopher :laughing:
Why would you think he flew
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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