Love song

[Fa-Q]

Very good, great emotion showed here and I felt the second verse is a little better than the first....the only couplet I didnt like was the teddy bear line(s)....just seemed like a corny metaphor....idk but keep it up, bro

[Innovation]

Overall, it was a good drop.

I could really get a sense of the emotion you were trying to put across. I also really liked how you rhymed internally on the last verse.

As Fa-Q stated, the teddy bear lined seemed a tad corny and I think you could have made the verse a little more complex by using multi's.

But again, I liked the drop. Well done.