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[Slim's Shady]

hoopla.

[Ka0t1c]

no.

[Slim's Shady]

Thank you for your constructive criticism, buddy.

smh.

[Fa-Q]

a punchline is usually a double meaning....not combination of words....thats shit wayne does....Cartermatic

[Slim's Shady]

A punchline doesn't neccesarily have to be a double meaning but now that i look bad it's a terrible punchline

[Fa-Q]

A punchline doesn't neccesarily have to be a double meaning but now that i look bad it's a terrible punchline

yeah I said USUALLY because it USUALLY is....if you like that line just make it a bit more complex and use it...its no big deal. Dont make the writers on here dictate how you write

[Slim's Shady]

A punchline doesn't neccesarily have to be a double meaning but now that i look bad it's a terrible punchline

yeah I said USUALLY because it USUALLY is....if you like that line just make it a bit more complex and use it...its no big deal. Dont make the writers on here dictate how you write

Well, on top of the fact that the line wasn't well-recieved (not only in this thread) I looked at it again and smh'd @ it. I'm just kind of a perfectionist and this is the last line of this collab verse I'm doing so it has to be mind-blowing