Abstract

[Block]

Another abstract rapper you will never understand,
I'll put Warhol to shame because I'm better with my hands
and my sentiment to fans is, stand avoid the antics
when you can deploy the panic, can it up and sell it off..
embellish all your earnings to the prettiest bidder,
pretty is bitter with her makeup off, (the grittiest winner)..
You can fake along and make a law to save it all on taxes,
the fact is.. We deminish finishline fallacies
and traction only matters where it's "at" to begin with <<<{ATtraction}
It's actually a simple type of notion,
I could read it to a pigeon ripping open the decision to float
yo.. Easy now, he's getting a little serious
and here he is..
wasting away, while you are tasting the day light
of playwrites.. making a stay right, here...
Try to see a side of me confined inside a timing ring
to catch a bit of "I would need"
and blast it with the irony of this.. This..
This piston of hope,
This miniscule loathing here that has you lifting your throat..
distant chokes from the screams and the miserable notes
hopes and dreams that you deem to be the meaning of both,
You need a joke, need a rope you need a reason to cope..
with the stress this is only what a test is,
while the rest is, a wreckless environmental hazard
in a cavern that was tested for asbestos
in a matter of speech..
While you had rested in peace,
Best believe we let the sediments sleep, rest easy..
Close your tired eyes with those stained-glass curtains
a worthless sheen meant to work beneath a black surface
and cement a purpose for existance, a pitiful work..
pick the perks, your depiction of worth
worse than ever is the severance we never get to earn
Fiction first with the tall tales and icarus too.. (burn your wings)
you'll learn to sing to the bitterest truth..
Listen you, this is true when those coffee grinds would often times bicker with you
You take the bitter with the better or get rid of the brew ..
The baby with the bath-water, maybe we should ask harder
Maybe we should strain to seek a way to keep with nascar
a faster pace.. while we run around in circles in this rat race..


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[MikeNUFC]

Impressive, I loved your choice of vocab, and this part was fucking brilliant:

This miniscule loathing here that has you lifting your throat..
distant chokes from the screams and the miserable notes
hopes and dreams that you deem to be the meaning of both,
You need a joke, need a rope you need a reason to cope..

The internal's and multies throughout the piece were complex yet not forced. Seriously good.

I lost the flow at some parts but that might just be me.

[classthe_king]

You're choice of words to rhyme is amazing lol, I wish I was as creative as you when it comes to rhyming.

And no Mike, it's not just you, I have not once caught onto his flow

[Block]

Thanks guys. this piece is something I was playing with last night.
The flow does fall off from "with the stress" to "sleep easy".. Well, not fall off, per se, just choppy. It needs to be rewritten in those parts.

When I can get in a studio here in ny, I'll be able to post up a track so y'all don't just think I'm crazy for writing with no structure lol.


@class: lol. Check ur pms bro

[classthe_king]

I don't have any pms

[BILI]

I love this,dope drop man,I could actually flow wit for most of the part.

Also those lines Mike posted are fuckin awesome indeed.

[Block]

I don't have any pms

Lol, that's cos it took me like 20 minutes to write.


And thanks bili.. I'm glad you enjoyed it bro.

[Mahmoud48]

damn the amount of complex words u have in ur lyrics are amazing

[Ka0t1c]

dude, nice drop! keep doing what you do

[Block]

Thanks mah and kaotic. Good looks, guys.

[Slim's Shady]

You're choice of words to rhyme is amazing lol, I wish I was as creative as you when it comes to rhyming.

And no Mike, it's not just you, I have not once caught onto his flow

This.

I would never think of some of these words to rhyme. I wouldn't even think of some of those words to use because they're too complex for my feeble mind lol

k block always delivering quality raps

[Atone]

i want to hear this on audio, shit sounds dope as fuck, love the multies and the vocab

[Block]

Haha, thanks guys. Thanks everyone for the positive feed.

Jekyl, I'll be getting my audio ish up soon. Long story, but apart from going to a studio, all my audio stuff is in storage in new jersey.

[mcZu]

Don't know about the rest, but I could follow the flow perfectly.. always have with your pieces. Choice of words is good, indeed. Wordplay is, as the title depicts, abstract and pretty witty too. Enjoyed it. Overal message is nice as well, suits your dislike-of-brag-punchlines attitude. Good work, nothing really to complain about, since the audio is where it all falls or stands. PM me the song, if/when recorded, curious to know how it'll turn out.

[Block]

I agree that the lyrics are meaningless without the audio to back it. I can't express how bad I'm dieing to record right now. I've got like 20 full songs that need recording. It's killing me, lol.


Thanks for the feed, though, bro.