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Re: Did yall miss me? Well the King is back

Postby Willy » Nov 27th, '10, 11:50

:coffee: :coffee:
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Re: Did yall miss me? Well the King is back

Postby Xray » Nov 27th, '10, 13:39

classthe_king wrote:I’m Mike with Pepsi; everything off the top is fire
Mrs. Johnny Storm in labour, got the hottest delivery

LMFAO. You sick bastard. :laughing:
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Re: Did yall miss me? Well the King is back

Postby classthe_king » Nov 27th, '10, 17:20

WilyMo021 wrote::coffee: :coffee:

Take Notes


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classthe_king wrote:I’m Mike with Pepsi; everything off the top is fire
Mrs. Johnny Storm in labour, got the hottest delivery

LMFAO. You sick bastard. :laughing:


Haha what?
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: Did yall miss me? Well the King is back

Postby Xray » Nov 28th, '10, 06:16

Those punches stood out along with the first two lines. Dope drop man. lol @ at these kids thinking they better. Sentus and Heist collabos coming soon. Take over ya dig?!
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Re: Did yall miss me? Well the King is back

Postby Willy » Nov 28th, '10, 08:16

Write something coherent and with a message and i might consider it. :y:
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Re: Did yall miss me? Well the King is back

Postby Block » Nov 28th, '10, 08:45

WilyMo021 wrote:Write something coherent and with a message and i might consider it. :y:


Watch out, class, this guy crushes dragons with ease and stabs people with trees. No lie.
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Re: Did yall miss me? Well the King is back

Postby Willy » Nov 28th, '10, 09:52

Fundamental difference is I don't want to be taken seriously and he does. :y:
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Re: Did yall miss me? Well the King is back

Postby DƎRDYPK » Nov 28th, '10, 14:39

^ bitching story bro
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Re: Did yall miss me? Well the King is back

Postby classthe_king » Nov 28th, '10, 16:30

WilyMo021 wrote:Write something coherent and with a message and i might consider it. :y:


I was just playing around with this. If you don't think I've ever written something coherent with a message you're fucking crazy :laughing:
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: Did yall miss me? Well the King is back

Postby BILI » Nov 28th, '10, 16:50

WilyMo021 wrote:Write something coherent and with a message and i might consider it. :y:

i'll drink a flagon of mead and crush a dragon with ease
battling me? you mad or cant see?
you'll be holy like the fuckin' vatican priest after the gat has been squeezed
i've mastered this craft that you speak of but rap's done had it with me
hip hop walked up to me and got stabbed with a tree
and while her abdomen bleeds and she's gasping to breathe
a few words manage to leave now she's asking for peace
but bitch just a few weeks ago you were laughin at me!
you called me outlandish and weak, said my plan to succeed
was a lost cause like both of anakin's feet
lost my money to xanax and weed and developed a manic disease
lit candles to see how you've been handling me
i panicked and weeped but now i stand on my feet
i realize all this time that you've been damaged and weak
once i dismantle your fleet ill channel the heat
time for me to take your throne and fucking stand on the seat


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Re: Did yall miss me? Well the King is back

Postby Willy » Nov 28th, '10, 19:28

i'll drink a flagon of mead and crush a dragon with ease
battling me? you mad or cant see?
you'll be holy like the fuckin' vatican priest after the gat has been squeezed
i've mastered this craft that you speak of but rap's done had it with me
hip hop walked up to me and got stabbed with a tree
and while her abdomen bleeds and she's gasping to breathe
a few words manage to leave now she's asking for peace
but bitch just a few weeks ago you were laughin at me!
you called me outlandish and weak, said my plan to succeed
was a lost cause like both of anakin's feet
lost my money to xanax and weed and developed a manic disease
lit candles to see how you've been handling me
i panicked and weeped but now i stand on my feet
i realize all this time that you've been damaged and weak
once i dismantle your fleet ill channel the heat
time for me to take your throne and fucking stand on the seat

Not enough to discredit me, regardless I am not a rapper. Punchline brag rapping is boring as shit.
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Re: Did yall miss me? Well the King is back

Postby Fa-Q » Nov 28th, '10, 19:30

Lets not compare talent, guys :flower:
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Re: Did yall miss me? Well the King is back

Postby Willy » Nov 28th, '10, 19:33

He is more talented, never claimed to be good. I just don't think that style of rapping is that impressive.
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Re: Did yall miss me? Well the King is back

Postby classthe_king » Nov 28th, '10, 19:36

Hop off my dick faggot


Take your walls n smash it, I’m always causin havoc
My delivery's across the atlas like Santa Claus's magic
If you forgot who Class is then I’m goona off the fascists
Put you in your coffin fastest to see you rot in caskets
I'll always saw n slash his brain when I draw the axes
My paws are massive, I’ll knock the planet off its axis
My claws leave gashes that creates an awesome graphic
This is automatic so on every track I cock and blast it
Your loss was tragic but you paid the cost of passage
I brought the baddest to take out these closet faggots
I'm on the attack its making every song a classic
The applause is habit, given without a thought or fact its
Crazy how distraught this rap is, good but a lot to mask it
We are all a captive, banged like were caught in rapids
I’m haukin acid meant to roast every bar to ashes
I'm lost in madness, my heart is cold the frost has grasped it

This is over a year old hahahahahahahah
You stay losin
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Re: Did yall miss me? Well the King is back

Postby Willy » Nov 28th, '10, 19:38

I'm trolling a troll. It would help if your pride wasn't on the line here lol. :y:
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