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Microphone (feat. Sentus, mcZu & MikeNUFC)

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Microphone (feat. Sentus, mcZu & MikeNUFC)

Postby Slim's Shady » Nov 28th, '10, 20:31

Instrumental: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ufKQrROu6Ug. My part starts at :10 so you should find your way from there :y:

(Slim's)
Uhh, too many terrorists with no bombs,
...Too many juans but they're no dons,
I make every track, that I'm on dangerous,
Like a drunk bitch driving a train, paging us,
If you got rage for us, then my gage will bust,
We're so holy,.....god prays to us,
Worship me, the boss or face the pavement,
With a blade edged hammer, I break and scrape him,
Soft guys with huge assholes', they been to prison,
To chicks untouchable...lowest class in Hinduism,
Too many straight guys, not enough gay guys,
Ask the rain gods for it to rain guys, pray wise!,
I'll grow up to be a rapping rapist priest, say what?
So I can sneak up to fuck children and the game up,
If I'm near you area, you instantly collect fear,
Throwing tantrums like kids if I say that Fred's queer,
If I see a Hollister shop I'ma shoot up that mall,
If I diss a famous rapper, they blew up to fall,
Like workers at a slaughterhouse, suit up for raw,
This is the twilight zone where True Blood is flawed,
Rappers, quit making shit music on that microphone,
Sentus, it's time to get stupid on that microphone!,

(Sentus)
My hypes igniting so don’t fight the mic king
Cause every punch thrown is a strike of lightning
Inside I’m dying for my chance to hit the stage
N spit a blaze so sick it plagues till the end of days
What I meant to say is I’ve got something inside
Wantin to rise n won’t stop till I’m touchin the skies
And heaven’s seen the magic when I crush the beat
I’m seventeen and already no one fucks with me
I’m conquerin on sight the second the base slams
A monster on the mic, the nerdlucks from space jam
All you faggots that just keep on playin my shit
Try and talk crap about me but yo stay on my dick
Cause when I grab the pen and touch the page
It’s like I know I had to win so I clutched a blade
And put it at ya throat cause when this rap was spoke
All you were shook like you had a massive stroke

(mcZu)
Don’t bother, why? On the mic you just utter lies
You get no action like the other guys in The Other Guys
And you wonder why? Even if the mic were flammable
You wouldn’t be able to spit heat, you’re edible
And I’m always hungry, you’re nothing but laughable
I’ll damage you, while I’m writing these letters too
I got a Denzel attitude, on this track I’m Unstoppable
You’re the weak link, even my weak ink’s particles
Are enough to show the public how fake you are like a Wiki leaks article
I’ll leave you in the midst of chaos like the A letter too
Me losing is improbable, full stop, you’d better move
I’ll have your back in a rack of fossils.. and skull.. art
Beating me is like Zach Galifianakis in latex.. impossible to pull.. off
You’re not hard, you’re fake, you’re a pacemaker
I’m prone to break fakers, embrace your fate, faker
I’ve got a surgical touch, so, next time you make a face
When you face me, you’ll face a major place changer

(MikeNUFC)
I’m like the rap genre, I got an unfair reputation
I might go snap on ya, but that’s cus of the steps you taking’
Fuck it; my bad mood shall be blamed on you
Suck it, you sad? Brood – your whole games rained through
Call it off, cus Barry Manilow will be shamed too
I heard your verse – only cus mine was on before
Absurd, like playing Eminem Show then Encore
I see you look surprised cus there was no crazy multie
No need cus I take your eyes and make you believe they’re faulty
If this was audio I’d do the same with ya ears
Collab? I’ll write a joke verse to be taming your fears
Then I’ll re-write it... without letting ya know
You’ll wanna fight it but you’ll be left in the snow
And you'll end up with cold feet – never rap (wrap) again
Until Xmas, when you’re getting gifts for me and my best friend
See, I ‘Wrek’ it like Smif N Wessun and I’m ‘Shinin’ til the quest end

EDIT: forgot to leave the feedback. viewtopic.php?f=24&t=102966
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Re: Microphone (feat. Sentus, mcZu & MikeNUFC)

Postby MikeNUFC » Nov 28th, '10, 20:36

LOL I should have wrote my verse to that Microphone beat, my flows just completely random.

Zu killed it.

EDIT: To be honest, reading through all 4 again, I didnt think anyone came particular hard. Zu had the best verse, although class was pretty good too. I liked your verse SS but I didnt think it flowed that well.

Oh and my rhyme scheme is so fucked up. I knew I'd done that but cbf to change it. I defo had the worst verse.
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Re: Microphone (feat. Sentus, mcZu & MikeNUFC)

Postby Slim's Shady » Nov 28th, '10, 20:37

MikeNUFC wrote:LOL I should have wrote my verse to that Microphone beat, my flows just completely random.

Zu killed it.

I actually flowed yours to the Microphone beat and it wasn't that random. I lost my flow at the last two lines tho.

Oh and I got murked :zipped:
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Re: Microphone (feat. Sentus, mcZu & MikeNUFC)

Postby classthe_king » Nov 28th, '10, 20:41

I didn't write to the microphone beat at all or follow your instructions for the times :laughing:

I just wrote a hot 16
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Re: Microphone (feat. Sentus, mcZu & MikeNUFC)

Postby Slim's Shady » Nov 28th, '10, 20:45

classthe_king wrote:I didn't write to the microphone beat at all or follow your instructions for the times :laughing:

I just wrote a hot 16

smh.

You will have to if this is recorded someday :whistle:
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Re: Microphone (feat. Sentus, mcZu & MikeNUFC)

Postby classthe_king » Nov 28th, '10, 20:47

Slim's Shady wrote:
classthe_king wrote:I didn't write to the microphone beat at all or follow your instructions for the times :laughing:

I just wrote a hot 16

smh.

You will have to if this is recorded someday :whistle:


It's going to be recorded on Wendsday :coffee:
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Re: Microphone (feat. Sentus, mcZu & MikeNUFC)

Postby Slim's Shady » Nov 28th, '10, 20:47

Not for me though :'(
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Re: Microphone (feat. Sentus, mcZu & MikeNUFC)

Postby mcZu » Nov 28th, '10, 20:51

Nice verses, guys. Some pretty dope lines in there. And if you guys want to record this, hit me up, lol. My recording quality is fucked up, though.
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Re: Microphone (feat. Sentus, mcZu & MikeNUFC)

Postby Fa-Q » Nov 28th, '10, 20:53

All four of you guys killed this. Really liked Slim's Shady verse, great flow. Class had some quotable lines, but seemed like a step down from that verse you dropped earlier. Zu, spot on as usual...loved those two opening lines. And Mike, had maybe four corny lines but I liked the multis the best in your verse.

Good verses everybody :y: :y:
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Re: Microphone (feat. Sentus, mcZu & MikeNUFC)

Postby Slim's Shady » Nov 28th, '10, 21:20

Glad you enjoyed this Q :happy:
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Re: Microphone (feat. Sentus, mcZu & MikeNUFC)

Postby WakeUpShow » Nov 28th, '10, 22:26

Great job everyone, would love to hear this recorded. I do agree with Fa-Q that this was a step down for you Sentus, but I still think you and Zu had the best verses.
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Re: Microphone (feat. Sentus, mcZu & MikeNUFC)

Postby Slim's Shady » Nov 28th, '10, 23:16

Good looks Cosh :y:
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Re: Microphone (feat. Sentus, mcZu & MikeNUFC)

Postby classthe_king » Nov 29th, '10, 02:05

Thanks, this wasn't a piece I put much effort into as you can tell.
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Re: Microphone (feat. Sentus, mcZu & MikeNUFC)

Postby classthe_king » Nov 29th, '10, 03:32

Amadeo wrote:Pretty good stuff. I could read Class' and Zu's stuff and flow it in my head.

I think Zu needs to improve his rhyming. I think Mike's rhymes were solid but his flow was a little hard to follow. The impressive thing about his verse is that there was a narrative thread running through his verse. Wasn't just two lines, then on to another topic for another two lines, then onto another topic...

How do you guys organize these written collabs? Wouldn't mind getting in on one of them. I have some free time on my hands lately and wouldn't mind practising some rap lyrics.


We just pm each other, you can get in on one with me and cosh if you want.
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Re: Microphone (feat. Sentus, mcZu & MikeNUFC)

Postby MikeNUFC » Nov 29th, '10, 17:13

Yeah my flow's crap. I need to start writing to beats more. It works okay in my head but I cant imagine how anyone else picks it up lol.
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