Vent (Feat. Classthe_king) His verse still to be edited in

[ShaBruv]

At the edge 'lonely this is my last attempt to vent
Underfed, boney, But i can't resist my nasty temperament
Suicidal thought's, guess death's a part of life
Who am i to talk, assess and start to write
Spit my heart tonight, let the pen cry on the page
But tears away i'll wipe ,repent and die a sage
Spit fire lines with Satan, stay on my grind like im skatin
They say rap's rocky but for me it's plain sailing
Used to act cocky, no silver lining, rain veiling
By lightening i was struck , an epiphany was imminent
My life became unstuck, lit up just like a filament
I say rap changed my life, and i know its a cliche
But its like im living in a movie, but now i right the screenplay

Feed:http://www.forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=24&t=103146

Feedback please

P.S the flow is a bit off

[classthe_king]

lolwut

[ShaBruv]

lolwut

couldnt wait

[WakeUpShow]

lolwut

you gon get to our collab first right?

[classthe_king]

Every motherfucker wants a collab from me. I guess that's the price to pay when you're the best.