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Trail Of Tearz

Postby Audi » Dec 4th, '10, 17:53

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You a one trick pony and your multies out of order
My alias: depth charge, I'ma blow you out the water
And like a step daughter bend you over my knee
Which is funny, you're like 20 somethin, older than me
I put my soul in a beat, put your frame in a box
Run for cover, here, I got a blanket with Pox
Bout as angry as Pac, you couldn't pay me to stop
Settin fire to reservations when blazin the spot
I'm crazy at slots, you gonna owe me cash dude
Tearin down the casino with ya homie Fa-Q
Fuck the rap crew, and talkin tough
I didn't steal ya iPod, but you lost ya touch
Drop it bra, cause damn you suck at music
Yah's makin fire? I bet that it's with two sticks
Useless, I'll stick a cactus in your new bitch
Just to let her know that you're fuckin with a huge prick
Use fists, I bet your bow and arrows too sick
This ain't a rodeo show, but man I'm smelling bullshit
You're too bitch to even carry my jock
You didn't suit up in pads or ever carry the rock
You grabbed the gatorade cups and handed em off
But you can catch a bullet if the hammer is cocked
Damn ock...I'm J Roc in his prime nikka
The spine splitter, Wild Bill the hide stitcher
Rhymin witcha is a task not a blessing
Why you have a duo? Me and Class are the best team
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Re: Trail Of Tearz

Postby classthe_king » Dec 4th, '10, 19:04

That was insane :worship:
Flow was crazy, multi's were placed perfectly and some of the punches were great. Good looks on the shout :smoking:
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: Trail Of Tearz

Postby Audi » Dec 4th, '10, 19:40

I'm going to stop aiming for 16. I'm just going to write till I don't have anything left.
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Re: Trail Of Tearz

Postby Yah-hah » Dec 5th, '10, 01:10

:D Aight Col I got you. BTW I kicked ass at football full-ride to Oklahoma State :wave:
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Trail Of Tearz

Postby Yah-hah » Dec 5th, '10, 01:18

OH and btw
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..............dissin me :shakehead:
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Trail Of Tearz

Postby Audi » Dec 5th, '10, 04:47

Amadeo wrote:I could rap it in my head and flow it perfectly. Good job.

Solid rhyming.

First two lines were cool.

Liked the iPod punch. :y:



Is that a Yah-hah diss?

Yeah idk if he thought that was serious lol. Just thought I'd liven the rage that lies within TR. Boredom and messes with a friend lol.
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Re: Trail Of Tearz

Postby Yah-hah » Dec 5th, '10, 16:24

Ya I know it wasn't like a serious one. I thought it was pretty good. I've heard a lot of Native punches tho so its hard to get one thats like DAMN ya know. K block had some really good ones. I gotta little diss track comin tho I got 2 days off of work so I'll try to get something goin
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Trail Of Tearz

Postby Audi » Dec 5th, '10, 16:26

Haha my next one is definitely going to center around that so watch out.
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Re: Trail Of Tearz

Postby Yah-hah » Dec 5th, '10, 18:30

Center around Native jokes? didnt know wat you meant lol I always like seein em tho
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Trail Of Tearz

Postby Ka0t1c » Dec 5th, '10, 21:23

damn, this shit hits hard in many many ways, i enjoy this piece even if it is harsh to Yah-hah :tounge2:
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: Trail Of Tearz

Postby Enimee » Dec 8th, '10, 16:00

another solid drop man, good shit i liked the fa-q line and the bullshit line

good drop man lol i hope yah comes back hard this might get interesting
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