Word's Myth - Mescaline

[Fa-Q]

Am I asleep or am I awake, and what lies under lies,
Raindrops on the windows, outside the thunder cries,
What winter sells, the next year, the summer buys,
Do I hang my head, it seems like it’s the gallows I fight,
My day dreams and nightmares, are shadows of light,
Drowned in the deep end, but the shallows in sight,
I’ll always stay cold hearted, ‘til the winter months ends,
Then I awake, and its like when a splinter wants friends,
With bags under my eyes, I’ll stay an obscene bachelor,
Am I asleep or am I awake, now I need a dream catcher,
Every time I leave the house, I stare in conceited mirrors,
Wearing clothes I hate, just so I don’t get greeted jeers,
New friends come in and out of my life, repeated peers,
But where ever I go, it seems all I ever meet is cheers,
Underneath that white wife beater, my heart’s dead beats
I lay awake, deep in thought, on my dark bed sheets,

The rest of you suffer, here I sit with mescaline,
Dreams every night, but the less of them,
The better, I slow dance with nightmares,
Sleeping with heart ache, I romance and fight tears,

While all of you are asleep, my eyes are lost in thesaurus,
My rivals fight in versus, their eyes crossed in the chorus,
I’ve seen a mountain of heroin; I lie in fields of the cocaine,
Speeding in the fast lane, avoiding shields in the slow lane,
I see dandelions flying in the wind, so I freeze in my tracks,
The concrete are fields, and each breathes in the cracks,
Every day, I dig my grave in my bed, where I rest my head,
Slipping in and out of consciousness, where I test the dead,
The less that’s said, I day dream and fall into arms of trust,
A woman chases me, with a bracelet full of charms of rust,
My karma fussed, knowing I always deserve the best bed,
Follow your dreams, and listen to your heart, her chest said,
She wrote a letter, and at the end with her lipstick smeared,
I read it under candlelight, the candle dripped wick teared,
From now until the end of time, I won’t get a wink of sleep,
I know I can’t relax, no matter how much I think of sheep,

The rest of you suffer, here I sit with mescaline,
Dreams every night, but the less of them,
The better, I slow dance with nightmares,
Sleeping with heart ache, I romance and fight tears,

Who knows when I’ll rest again, I’m stricken with this mescaline,
Am I wide awake, and where are those blue pills, I tried to take,

With goose bumps, feeling like the roughest of match boxes,
So I know when to awake, on alarm clocks, I attach watches,
When I finally awake, will I see stars, or just blue blurry skies,
With a smile across my face, or adopt some new worried cries,
My now paled skin feels like it has touched the south pole,
Prayers are forgotten once again, they’re such a mouthful,
But first the addiction, then finally comes the denial after,
And I will awake from this mescaline, with a child’s laughter,

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[Sam.]

Damn !
That's hot man , the level of dopeness was consistent through out verses.
Perfect 16's .
I can only wish if i had 1/10 of the skills you have.

[Fa-Q]

Thanks alot Sam

[AbramIsaac]

There are some nice lines in there. Very solid and consistent. Nicely crafted. Not sure I understand the mescaline reference though. It seems sort of vague, like it could be talking about any drug, since the content doesn't seem very psychedelic. Nice though, overall.

[Fa-Q]

Thanks alot, AI

[Fa-Q]

Thanks Hesty!!!!

[Fa-Q]

bump..

[Fa-Q]

Thanks Hesty!!!!

Hesky, and no problem!

Haha sorry about that Heskey....just kidding

[Fa-Q]

I dont even know why I said Hesty

[Slim Zaddy]

Damn bro this shit is so tight . I liked the first six lines . Words and lyrics with rhymes are all sick . It's a 9/10 I enjoyed keep the good work bro

[Fa-Q]

Thanks alot, Slim Zaddy

[ChristinaE12]

I really like this. Just like your other pieces I've fed. In my eyes, it's very well written and 'colorful'. Wonderful storytelling. Great rhyming. Basically what everyone else said too.

Good job.

[Fa-Q]

A thousand thank you's, Christiana

[Ka0t1c]

wow, i'm very impressed with this material, i like it cuz you didn't try hard to do something. so everything wasn't forced or nothing. very easy read, understandable and great story telling, thanx for droppin some good lyrics.

[TheRealSlim]

Very Nice work... Impressed...