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Word's Myth - Mescaline

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Re: Word's Myth - Mescaline

Postby Fa-Q » Dec 27th, '10, 23:26

Thanks Kaotic and Real Slim!!! :D
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Re: Word's Myth - Mescaline

Postby Enimee » Dec 28th, '10, 16:13

nothing negative to say really solid verse, i like the simplistic abstractness off it all. it was full of soo much emotion but it also kinda gave off a apathetic, numb, kinda submissive vibe too

idk thats just my interpretation, but yeah overall ill def agree with everyone else this is prolly one of the best most structurally sound peices of read on here, i think its the first piece of urs (that ive read) tho soo yeah hot shit big ups ill be feedin more

i liked this






p.s dope name lol
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Re: Word's Myth - Mescaline

Postby Fa-Q » Dec 29th, '10, 18:00

Haha, you have read from me, Enimee, I'm Fa-Q and changed my name to Words Myth. Thanks a million by the way :D
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Re: Word's Myth - Mescaline

Postby Enimee » Dec 29th, '10, 22:19

oh well damn, great shit as always then lol :P

i need to start keepin up to date with current events on this bitch since the battle rap section died i kinda been ghost focusin on other shit,

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Re: Word's Myth - Mescaline

Postby Spaceboundsupenova » Feb 17th, '11, 21:46

I love how you write, so many people on here are not like this. I can't even read three verses without stopping. If I had a mirror and lipstick right now I'd write a big =) right in front of yours and Have a beautiful day!
Peace out, peace out like a runaway slave!
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