another crack

[bipolar-bear]

written in about twenty minutes or so
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Love me or hate me dont give a fuck how you rate me
shove me now? nah better decapitate me
only way ya gonna me from raping/ or you could start fellating
i dont wanna have to resort to masturbating
ooh look at ya shaking /your legs ima break em
my consciense is vacant aint no use appealing
shrunk away all my feelings/ see sick shit i aint reeling,
unflinching when peeling ya skin wont stop if your squealing
im Winching you up and nailing you to the ceiling
look up and see you before i start dreaming
Wake up a four am violently screaming
plagued by evil mischievious demons
overwhelmed by every devious feeling
my psychiatrist shouldnt of started with me
got pissed and severed his artery
taught that motherfucker a fast lesson
and i aint paying for that last session

[bipolar-bear]

Needs refinement for sure but i wnated to get the lyircs down as fast as they came to me. looking over it now i can see a few extra rhymes i missed and i could deffo make the flow a bit smoother.

[classthe_king]

You need a link of feed

[bipolar-bear]

sorry to sound stupid but whats a "link of feed"

[classthe_king]

3) One link of feedback you have given will need to be posted before you post a song.

Basically just give feed to somebody else and then copy the url and post it with your piece as proof that you post something.

[bipolar-bear]

did i do the link of feed okay?

[classthe_king]

No...it has to be to another person's piece in CW

[bipolar-bear]

small rewrite, opinions?

[Ka0t1c]

my opinion is this should be locked and u should do a link of feedback.

[bipolar-bear]

link of feed!