Much Better Than You

[ShadyNarkoticz]

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It started out nice, I was friends with your lover
Said 'fuck it' and became your friend like all the others
Helped you break it off with him when times got rough
never wanted a relationship, looking back, it was tough
to even think about dating you, he'd been my friend of six years
but now you controlling my body like ether at six beers
i don't know what came over me, thinking all about you
because even at the start, knew it would turn obtuse
he warned me dont get involved, thinking it would evolve
started spouting 'i love you' like a childhood doll
knowing damn well what he was saying wasn't true
how dare he say bad things about perfect little you
i ended a friendship, as horrible as it seems
just so i could possibily hear that you maybe love me
so my life was set, you would be my all
blind at the fact a man would tear us apart
"I'm not interested in him at all", she cried
"You're the best thing that's ever happened to me", she lied
"Things will be different when you come around, baby, I swear"
But I soon found out, your words held zero air.
i gave you plenty of outs, sure i had my doubts
didn't want to tell me, figured i wouldn't find out
"wrong person", i sent, there was no reply
after that message, our love slowly died
now this guy you "aren't" with, i won't go into detail
but this bitch is as fake as a 1980s Lee nail
he puts up a front of being nice and polite
but he will kill you like being cocky at a red light
now that was below the belt and just so i don't sound bitter
can you grant me this last request? everytime you're with him
everytime that you fuck him, that you visualize my eyes
everytime that you cum, i bet you'll realize
what you gave up for him, true love eternal
but one thing im proud of, i've never been external
from the world since this happened, i never shed a tear
i never once thought about what i'd do if you were here
maybe i never loved you because you are a fleeting memory
just another girl, or who i truely used to be
one thing's for sure, you changed my life forever
you taught me to love myself and to happily endeavor
with that being said, i'm starting my life anew
and spending it with a girl, much better than you.

I recently started writing and this was my first song. Some simple rhymes, I know, but it's more about the story. Gimme that feedback!

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