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Your games are done..

Postby yamahiney16 » Feb 3rd, '11, 01:08

Blank stares and whimsical looks,
you think you have me figured out,
but it's still just a puzzle,
a mystery you still wish to solve,
you've yet to realize,
that I know more than you could possibly think,
have you not yet realized that I'm omniscient?

You told me to back down,
but when I did you grew angry,
you act as if you're high and mighty on your throne,
who do you honestly think could do more damage?
Whether its socially or electronically?
I haven't time for your pitiful ways,
and childish taunts.

You think I'm here to play?
That's the difference between you and I,
I haven't time for it,
do you honestly think I care anymore?
I've stopped caring,
until you brought it back up,
as I've said before,
I'm done with your games.




RATE! RATE! RATE!
i may be short, but im smart. The only thing ppl must know about me is: I'm always right, so get used to it
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Re: Your games are done..

Postby shadddyaftermatth » Feb 3rd, '11, 02:16

what is this =]
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Re: Your games are done..

Postby WakeUpShow » Feb 3rd, '11, 02:23

no rhyming?
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Re: Your games are done..

Postby classthe_king » Feb 3rd, '11, 02:26

This is the Creative Writing section, it could just be a poem.

Regardless, you need a link of feedback.
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: Your games are done..

Postby shadddyaftermatth » Feb 3rd, '11, 02:27

classthe_king wrote:This is the Creative Writing section, it could just be a poem.

Regardless, you need a link of feedback.

right 8===D~~>--->[:
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