Note to myself...

[mcZu]

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Been hated, discriminated, I should paraphrase it
How they segregated, I mean every ex I dated
Unlawful rated, impossible to name it
I had, I was it in each category of controversial statements
Whatever I stated, it was clear my estate is vascular orientated
Had me going back to basics, I made it
Known I wasn’t going to let the lack extra faded
I asked for medusa’s pavement
But this girl named Sara saved it..
Now I’m back to show I care, and to barricade it
By opening up, isn’t that oddly fair related?
You can’t keep it all in you’ll have to air the hatred
So I’m contemplating to tear the pact I’ve aided
To keep intact by destroying these latest
Expressions of depression that praised my facial contours in amazement
My emotional state on a con tour in a maze with
Nothing but an iota of my morals that I was raised with..

[ShadyNarkoticz]

It flows insanely well. Keep it up!

[mcZu]

Thanks for the comments, appreciate it. And, I'll probably finish this, yeah. I might add another verse and a hook to it.

[mcZu]

Bumpeezy.

[Sam.]

I would just support the statement's made above me by saying that the piece was well put and rhymed intelligently ,same sound rhyming is what i love to flow with and that is what i found in your verse done perfectly.

[mcZu]

Thanks for the comment, man, appreciate it.

[DƎRDYPK]

real nice verse Zu
I was read/rapping it in my mind & I like the flow you put together here

my favorite line outta the whole verse was

"You can’t keep it all in you’ll have to air the hatred"

^ real talk that's some of the truest stuff I'v red in CW

stay on the pen/notepad game though bra

[mcZu]

Thanks bro, appreciate it.

[mcZu]

B to the UMP.