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Postby WakeUpShow » Feb 1st, '11, 00:04

Instrumental: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DD-UUjzJ2zY

3-2-1- Cosh, a breath of fresh rap
Flowing on 7, you should check and step back
This ain't about drugs or any kinda violence
Just showcasing my skills for the many tryin to find this
Yo! lean back, and take in this unusual sight
A white suburban kid, who'd be abused in a fight
Same kid wrecking a rap, with the skill of veteran
Probably hearin this thinking i'm as ill as he's ever been
Your probably thinking that this flow is magnetic
The multis are unbelievable and so is my headache
Get it? Because I'm using this to get in your head
I do it for Hip-Hop, I'm never checkin for bread
I'm always seconds ahead, and you're left tryin to catch up
You going platinum is a lost cause like frying the ketchup
I'm fed up, and you know I'm willingly hungry
That went right over their head, like Sir William Lumley
Bluntly, I've thundered I'm the greatest
And my skills are a hundred times the greatest
Back to the asylum, my break retreat is almost done
Release a song, I'll take the beat and always run.


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Re: Seven

Postby X The Wise » Feb 1st, '11, 19:24

Could flow on the beat very well.
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Re: Seven

Postby WakeUpShow » Feb 2nd, '11, 01:41

bump..
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Re: Seven

Postby WakeUpShow » Feb 2nd, '11, 03:04

X The Wise wrote:Could flow on the beat very well.

and thanks man
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Re: Seven

Postby ShadyNarkoticz » Feb 2nd, '11, 22:30

Seems like the perfect introduction song for an album. Letting people what you can do and who you are. I like it. :smoking:
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"It is not about lyrics anymore. It's about a hot beat and a catchy hook."
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Re: Seven

Postby WakeUpShow » Feb 2nd, '11, 22:41

thanks man
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Re: Seven

Postby mdemaz » Feb 3rd, '11, 12:12

Pretty good rhymes Cosh.
Well done.
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Re: Seven

Postby WakeUpShow » Feb 4th, '11, 00:04

thanks guys. i was concentrating on flow.
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Re: Seven

Postby bipolar-bear » Feb 4th, '11, 00:17

nice, would like to hear it
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Re: Seven

Postby mdemaz » Feb 4th, '11, 01:42

Me too lol.
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Re: Seven

Postby WakeUpShow » Feb 4th, '11, 03:11

haha i wish..i dont have a :( mic
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