Still C.O.S.H

[WakeUpShow]

INSTRUMENTAL http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kAtxT5TaMxw

It frightens most when I commit arson to wax
The hardest to rap, I lay my life on the line and then harness it back
It would take a steel crane to pry my hand from the mic
I instill panic and fright and then I vanish from sight
The sort of lyrics that transcend rap, It happened at last,
I battled your ancestors and was back in a flash
Warning: battle me and taste defeat like Rex Ryan
The guillotine flow, sure to leave heads flyin
The Norse god of thunder, strike until you're sore with a lisp
Expose the holes in your story until you're an abyss
Still C.O.S.H and the name still invoke gasps
On a tight schedule, so I'm killin foes fast
Went from rhyming e-d with easy to these multies so legendary
Every lines personal, enough for you to sulk and be sedentary
My last drop went straight on my criminal record
So if the cops question you, all you heard was a minimal lecture

http://www.forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=24&t=107550

[Sam.]

lulz the flow is hard to catch up man damn and there is a sudden change in the rhyme scheme which makes it more difficult.
in places like

I battled your ancestors and was back in a flash
Warning: battle me and taste defeat like Rex Ryan
The guillotine flow, sure to leave heads flyin
The Norse god of thunder, strike until you're sore with a lisp

see

and also a quick change here

On a tight schedule, so I'm killin foes fast
Went from rhyming e-d with easy to these multies so legendary

changes are a part of writing but a sudden change hampers the flow.

My last drop went straight on my criminal record
So if the cops question you, all you heard was a minimal lecture

Tht being said it had gr8 lines i bold it for ya .

It frightens most when I commit arson to wax
The hardest to rap, I lay my life on the line and then harness it back
It would take a steel crane to pry my hand from the mic
I instill panic and fright and then I vanish from sight
The sort of lyrics that transcend rap, It happened at last,
I battled your ancestors and was back in a flash
Warning: battle me and taste defeat like Rex Ryan
The guillotine flow, sure to leave heads flyin
The Norse god of thunder, strike until you're sore with a lisp
Expose the holes in your story until you're an abyss
Still C.O.S.H and the name still invoke gasps
On a tight schedule, so I'm killin foes fast
Went from rhyming e-d with easy to these multies so legendary
Every lines personal, enough for you to sulk and be sedentary
My last drop went straight on my criminal record
So if the cops question you, all you heard was a minimal lecture

[WakeUpShow]

lulz the flow is hard to catch up man damn and there is a sudden change in the rhyme scheme which makes it more difficult.
in places like

I battled your ancestors and was back in a flash
Warning: battle me and taste defeat like Rex Ryan
The guillotine flow, sure to leave heads flyin
The Norse god of thunder, strike until you're sore with a lisp

see

and also a quick change here

On a tight schedule, so I'm killin foes fast
Went from rhyming e-d with easy to these multies so legendary

changes are a part of writing but a sudden change hampers the flow.

My last drop went straight on my criminal record
So if the cops question you, all you heard was a minimal lecture

Tht being said it had gr8 lines i bold it for ya .

It frightens most when I commit arson to wax
The hardest to rap, I lay my life on the line and then harness it back
It would take a steel crane to pry my hand from the mic
I instill panic and fright and then I vanish from sight
The sort of lyrics that transcend rap, It happened at last,
I battled your ancestors and was back in a flash
Warning: battle me and taste defeat like Rex Ryan
The guillotine flow, sure to leave heads flyin
The Norse god of thunder, strike until you're sore with a lisp
Expose the holes in your story until you're an abyss
Still C.O.S.H and the name still invoke gasps
On a tight schedule, so I'm killin foes fast
Went from rhyming e-d with easy to these multies so legendary
Every lines personal, enough for you to sulk and be sedentary
My last drop went straight on my criminal record
So if the cops question you, all you heard was a minimal lecture

thanks man, and do you get the Norse god line?

[Sam.]

thanks man, and do you get the Norse god line?

Care to explain , i am confused as to what i deciphered from that line.

[WakeUpShow]

thanks man, and do you get the Norse god line?

Care to explain , i am confused as to what i deciphered from that line.

Norse god of thunder= Thor
sore with a lisp= Thor

[WakeUpShow]

bump..

[CorrosionCover]

Lol i've caught the flow like automatically, i haven't looked at the lyrics meaning tho this sounded great !

I just had fun rapping this lol

[mdemaz]

Another nice piece.
Can't be arsed with feed atm...Busy...