Some new beats...

[iDEA91]

Hi guys just started working with FL Studio 9 XXL Producers edition and have uploaded a couple of beats to youtube. I know they're not the best, or even close, but I would be very thankful if you guys could take a look and tell me what u think, either on youtube or in this thread...

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6Uo7wKdWpA0
This is the first beat I ever made, just a couple days ago.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZTQIdv7ocYc
This was the second beat I made, on the same day.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5L4i49FJhAo
This is my personal favorite so far, using a sample from "My Immortal" by Evanescence.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jz1fYp-NQ3w
And this is the last one, I made last night.

Like I said, any constructive criticism, comments, or if anyone actually wants to use any of these beats just let me know, and like always these beats sound a lot better with earphones, thanks for all your time!

[Scrubz]

I listened to your personal fav, the beats nice and the samples cool...but thatts all there is. neeeds much more layers, effects, transition sounds from verse t ohook, hook to verse. Ive been wee you are, all you need is practice, for real. Get more complex and always try new things. check out my beats in my sig or any of my songs in the audio section i produce everything. Ever need help or advice pm me.

[iDEA91]

Hey thanks for the advice, I recently added two more beats, take a look...

http://www.youtube.com/user/HomegrownRecords417#p/a/u/1/dk07BFDsMzw
This one is alright, but like you said I need more layers and more clear transitions

http://www.youtube.com/user/HomegrownRecords417#p/a/u/0/BoB6RS9Qq-Y
and this one I just got finished, I used a little more layers than I usually do...

any other advice would be very much appreciated.

[iDEA91]

Made a new beat just now called "Destruction" Check it out and tell me what u think!
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Xx4ksnYkjEA