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Postby sneekyaddman88 » Feb 7th, '11, 05:44

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song i wrote to the beat of On my level- wiz khalifa

its a sick beat so i wanted to drop a quick verse on it.

Wiz pass the joint so I can get on my level
Underage drinking, feeling like a rebel
Raise your shot to me, thanks to the devil
We going full throttle, foots stuck on the pedal
Bump the bass up so I can feel the floor shaking
Smoking out the kitchen, you can say that were baking
Bend the bitch over, now the backs are breaking
I’m on my level hoe, no chance for mistaking
See a dime in the corner, she’s not leaving alone
Once I buy her some drinks, down a shot of Patron
Its known…….
Sloppy drunk by the end of the night
You on your level? Slug this down ,lets rock it tonight
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Re: On my level

Postby classthe_king » Feb 7th, '11, 05:50

YOU NEED A LINK OF FEED TO POST A SONG. READ THE RULES.
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: On my level

Postby sneekyaddman88 » Feb 7th, '11, 05:52

link to what? my lyrics? me rapping it? what does this link have to be toward
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Re: On my level

Postby Sam. » Feb 7th, '11, 11:17

Wonderful piece man.good lyrics .
add this link to the main post otherwise Mr.Chambers will delete this post.
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Re: On my level

Postby sneekyaddman88 » Feb 7th, '11, 19:44

MCSam wrote:Wonderful piece man.good lyrics .
add this link to the main post otherwise Mr.Chambers will delete this post.
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Wonderful piece man.good lyrics .

im getting a feeling that your being super sarcastic
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Re: On my level

Postby Sam. » Feb 7th, '11, 19:49

sneekyaddman88 wrote:
MCSam wrote:Wonderful piece man.good lyrics .
add this link to the main post otherwise Mr.Chambers will delete this post.
viewtopic.php?f=24&t=107684

It's an official rule. :coffee:


Wonderful piece man.good lyrics .

im getting a feeling that your being super sarcastic

http://www.forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=24&t=107684
add this nikka ,and lol at being sarcastic. :shakehead:
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Re: On my level

Postby sneekyaddman88 » Feb 8th, '11, 01:22

MCSam wrote:
sneekyaddman88 wrote:
MCSam wrote:Wonderful piece man.good lyrics .
add this link to the main post otherwise Mr.Chambers will delete this post.
viewtopic.php?f=24&t=107684

It's an official rule. :coffee:


Wonderful piece man.good lyrics .

im getting a feeling that your being super sarcastic

http://www.forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=24&t=107684
add this nikka ,and lol at being sarcastic. :shakehead:
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lol my bad man just seemed sarcastic. but thanks for the feedback. idk if u know that song but the flow and beat to that song is so sick
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Re: On my level

Postby Sam. » Feb 8th, '11, 13:27

sneekyaddman88 wrote:
lol my bad man just seemed sarcastic. but thanks for the feedback. idk if u know that song but the flow and beat to that song is so sick

I am a wiz khalifa fan too my brother and i like the way you wrote it on the beat of the song in question.
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Re: On my level

Postby sneekyaddman88 » Feb 8th, '11, 23:43

bump.... :8)
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