Oh Mike God in "Loserville"

[DƎRDYPK]

link of linkback: viewtopic.php?f=38&t=107700
tight beat with hook: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Xj-BL-U9V2U
my idea with this: if I could live that one day that never happened

*bra intro*

verse#1 *I start rapping 11 seconds in*

here in Loserville we got the freaks & the geeks
the sluts & the kreeps who never speak or get no sleep
it's all good though...we all a loser family
nobody here is left out from our family tree
the emo skater kids...those be my cousins
we tear up the skateparks, get drunk & straight blunted
even kids who never smoked before wanna hit the dutch
so I pass this kid a lighter & a blunt... he lit it up
he took a few hits than he passed it to his bitch
she passed it on to me & then I finished off that shit
I'm lighting a newport & I'm off to get a 6 pack
if there's something Imma teach these kids it's that

We can all escape to
Loserville...Loserville...Loserville
We can all be safe in
Loserville...Loserville...Loserville
Aint nobody cheating
Were happy for no reason
You can call me Alice in
Loserville...Loserville...Loserville

what's really nice is almost everyone's a junkie
we can score drugs for free without any money
so I hit the store up & I grab a pack of bud ice
head to the park & all I'm thinking is I love life
I'm finna meet up with an old lady friend
I really like her cause she thinks I'm crazy &
If I play my cards right I can get her pants off
but if not I atleast wanna get my hands on...
some part of her body cause I really wanna touch her
here she is though...should I tell her that I I love her?
she'd probably like that...wait shes fucking hugging me
she said "Mike it's been a while! I got some of what you wanna see"
I said "what do you mean?"...she took her clothes off
she said "it's time that you take me away!" I'm thinkin "OH GOD!"
forget the chit chat I went to where she's staying at...
& you don't need to know the rest...i'm just saying that

We can all escape to
Loserville...Loserville...Loserville
We can all be safe in
Loserville...Loserville...Loserville
Aint nobody cheating
Were happy for no reason
You can call me Alice in
Loserville...Loserville...Loserville

update:
the audio is out there folks
no links but I'll tell you that it's 2 clicks away

[Pauly D]

I really like this
the lyrics fit the beat and the hook almost perfectly. it flowed pretty good, only didn't flow when i messed up sayin a word, but other than that two

please finish it hah

[iain08]

I really enjoyed this because it didn't seem like one of those songs people write it on here where they're so focussed on multis and punchlines and shit that it takes away from the enjoyment.

That being said, the rhymes and flow were spot on.

Nice

[mdemaz]

High swag level is high.

[Sam.]

good one goes with the beat ,keep at it.

[WakeUpShow]

good hook, simple rhyming. but it's all good. good drop