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Yo Waz Up Im New!!!!!

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Yo Waz Up Im New!!!!!

Postby King_Shady » Feb 7th, '11, 04:00

well im new here and would like to know all of you in this forum (i heard that this is a great forum)
and by introducing myself i would like to share a Poem/Verse to all

IM HERE


I have no tear or blood in my eyes
The words in my mouth disguise
The saying that I’m saying
Telling you all to hear me
But don’t fear me
Cause I have no thoughts
It’s a blank page with no ink
That’s all I think
It’s my link to imagination
My creation is my nation
To get you to listen to my record station
Words flow through my mouth
But don’t get picked up by the sound
They break apart and don’t refill
Cause it’s a relapse to drugs and hate
Its like getting picked up by
The sent of cocaine that was trapped in a vent
I’m addicted to the crack
Hell n aim better than that
With two guns in my pants
Stick this shit ay your forehead and make you dance
You ganna die if you fail
My trance
To complete you
And kill your romance
Next thing you know I shoot
And the bullet goes through you while I toot it
Your gone your whole life went past with a flash
Of your that’s right of your naked ass
And your whole life goes into oblivion
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Re: Yo Waz Up Im New!!!!!

Postby Pauly D » Feb 11th, '11, 01:09

This hardly rhymed at all, simple rhyming if it did rhyme, no multies, and your lines were too short and poorly structured
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Re: Yo Waz Up Im New!!!!!

Postby NicoleEM » Feb 11th, '11, 02:23

Well im not good at reading rhymes,so i'll stick to a simple Welcome :)
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Re: Yo Waz Up Im New!!!!!

Postby mdemaz » Feb 11th, '11, 02:26

Link of feed?
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Re: Yo Waz Up Im New!!!!!

Postby Sam. » Feb 11th, '11, 07:26

mdemaz wrote:Link of feed?

:coffee:
ya bra lock this thread with your amazing powers.
welcome tho
[Rollefsen] - SajN retired, bitch got old, unlike Sams "ladies".
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Re: Yo Waz Up Im New!!!!!

Postby mdemaz » Feb 11th, '11, 08:28

Sam likes big dicks..
:wave:
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Re: Yo Waz Up Im New!!!!!

Postby Sam. » Feb 11th, '11, 13:10

mdemaz wrote:Sam likes big dicks..
:wave:

:tounge2:
your drunk and seeing things get some glasses and :coffee:
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