I've posted this before, but I believe it got deleted because I didn't leave a link of feedback...The thing was, I didn't understand what a link of feedback was...But now I think I got it.
Here's my link of feedback: viewtopic.php?f=24&t=107684
Here's the long verse, please rate and leave some feedback!
Got a covenant with Lucifa, sayin' if anybody chooses ta
Disrespect, I'll twist his neck, and proceed to abusin' her
Or him, strip 'em naked and have 'em bathe in ether
Take a flick of the decayin' facial features, spray a preacher
Take ma teachers, duct tape 'em to the quad bench
Slap 'em all and let 'em know that I'm tired of this nonsense
It don't stop there, hit the street and pop some random queers
Blunt between my lips, and I've occupied my hands with beers
Matter fact, don't just blast the fags, pop everybody standin' near
Take the corpses home to let 'em hang up on my chandelier
Seat some at my table, pretendin' they're my dinner guests
Come take a stroll with me into this sinner's quest
To destruct and kill, could care less what people fuckin' feel
Drug my victims till they feel like nothin's real
Feelin' highly tempted to push a newborn through a meat grinda
Then settin' up a meetin' at a discreet kinda
Location, with a couple chicks, leave the hoes waitin'
Soon as I pull up with an axe, they realize there's no 'scapin
The thoughts that overtake, my brain when I hold the K
And dream of shattering the bones of an infants shoulderblades
And when I'm old and grey, and kids are fuckin' up my front lawn
I'm gon' straight run up on 'em with guns drawn
And let those motherfuckers know they better scatter quick
Or else I'll bruise and batter, till the blood ooze and splatter from they shattered ribs
Rate and leave feedback please!
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Rate and leave feedback please!
by RainMan44 » Feb 10th, '11, 05:26
"This dude doing this interview wants me to spin a few,
Lyrics while I tie my tennis shoes in the nude
A romantic interlude in a livin’ room,
In an inner tube with a dude with a bit of lube
Fuck that I’m sniffin’ glue, sippin' gin & juice,
And a little bit of paint thinner with my dinner too,
You better pay me for my bars like your rent is due,
Now hurry up and finish dude before I finish you."
GOAT
Lyrics while I tie my tennis shoes in the nude
A romantic interlude in a livin’ room,
In an inner tube with a dude with a bit of lube
Fuck that I’m sniffin’ glue, sippin' gin & juice,
And a little bit of paint thinner with my dinner too,
You better pay me for my bars like your rent is due,
Now hurry up and finish dude before I finish you."
GOAT
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Re: Rate and leave feedback please!
by DƎRDYPK » Feb 10th, '11, 05:40
not too bad at all 
not much more I can say about it
the writings on some wicked shit style but really I cant complain about
keep at it
not much more I can say about it
the writings on some wicked shit style but really I cant complain about
keep at it
Last edited by DƎRDYPK on Feb 10th, '11, 05:48, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: Rate and leave feedback please!
by RainMan44 » Feb 10th, '11, 05:48
DƎRDYPK wrote:not too bad at all
not much more I can say about it
the writings on some wicked shit style but I cant complain
keep at it
Haha thanks man
And it was my first time doing this nasty wicked shit...I usually write about life and shit lol
"This dude doing this interview wants me to spin a few,
Lyrics while I tie my tennis shoes in the nude
A romantic interlude in a livin’ room,
In an inner tube with a dude with a bit of lube
Fuck that I’m sniffin’ glue, sippin' gin & juice,
And a little bit of paint thinner with my dinner too,
You better pay me for my bars like your rent is due,
Now hurry up and finish dude before I finish you."
GOAT
Lyrics while I tie my tennis shoes in the nude
A romantic interlude in a livin’ room,
In an inner tube with a dude with a bit of lube
Fuck that I’m sniffin’ glue, sippin' gin & juice,
And a little bit of paint thinner with my dinner too,
You better pay me for my bars like your rent is due,
Now hurry up and finish dude before I finish you."
GOAT
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Re: Rate and leave feedback please!
by DƎRDYPK » Feb 10th, '11, 05:51
I also like how you colored certain parts of your text... 
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by RainMan44 » Feb 10th, '11, 05:55
DƎRDYPK wrote:I also like how you colored certain parts of your text...
I was hoping it helps you differentiate which word rhymes with which..did it help? lol
"This dude doing this interview wants me to spin a few,
Lyrics while I tie my tennis shoes in the nude
A romantic interlude in a livin’ room,
In an inner tube with a dude with a bit of lube
Fuck that I’m sniffin’ glue, sippin' gin & juice,
And a little bit of paint thinner with my dinner too,
You better pay me for my bars like your rent is due,
Now hurry up and finish dude before I finish you."
GOAT
Lyrics while I tie my tennis shoes in the nude
A romantic interlude in a livin’ room,
In an inner tube with a dude with a bit of lube
Fuck that I’m sniffin’ glue, sippin' gin & juice,
And a little bit of paint thinner with my dinner too,
You better pay me for my bars like your rent is due,
Now hurry up and finish dude before I finish you."
GOAT
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Re: Rate and leave feedback please!
by mdemaz » Feb 10th, '11, 06:23
This needs a beat...Right....Now......
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Just Silver wrote:I think every guy should massage their prostate at least once
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Re: Rate and leave feedback please!
by RainMan44 » Feb 10th, '11, 09:35
mdemaz wrote:This needs a beat...Right....Now......
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=d0ywbE3dTyY&feature=related
"This dude doing this interview wants me to spin a few,
Lyrics while I tie my tennis shoes in the nude
A romantic interlude in a livin’ room,
In an inner tube with a dude with a bit of lube
Fuck that I’m sniffin’ glue, sippin' gin & juice,
And a little bit of paint thinner with my dinner too,
You better pay me for my bars like your rent is due,
Now hurry up and finish dude before I finish you."
GOAT
Lyrics while I tie my tennis shoes in the nude
A romantic interlude in a livin’ room,
In an inner tube with a dude with a bit of lube
Fuck that I’m sniffin’ glue, sippin' gin & juice,
And a little bit of paint thinner with my dinner too,
You better pay me for my bars like your rent is due,
Now hurry up and finish dude before I finish you."
GOAT
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Re: Rate and leave feedback please!
by mdemaz » Feb 10th, '11, 09:54
That fits surprisingly well.
s/o to Eedee Python CP Horse Snake Pain SaJn Silver Cement Excitaz PK Rolly GW EG Charlotte Kasia Mel Wiz Solace TRex SliK Aone Atone Trimss Menzo Geno Fish Jaba Detroit Blogs Based lil_b IBR DA! Mono ROM NRG Bigray Hesky Francesco Yoda Noddy Raul
Just Silver wrote:I think every guy should massage their prostate at least once
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Re: Rate and leave feedback please!
by RainMan44 » Feb 10th, '11, 09:59
mdemaz wrote:That fits surprisingly well.
I know, I was looking for a beat for about an hour..finally found it
"This dude doing this interview wants me to spin a few,
Lyrics while I tie my tennis shoes in the nude
A romantic interlude in a livin’ room,
In an inner tube with a dude with a bit of lube
Fuck that I’m sniffin’ glue, sippin' gin & juice,
And a little bit of paint thinner with my dinner too,
You better pay me for my bars like your rent is due,
Now hurry up and finish dude before I finish you."
GOAT
Lyrics while I tie my tennis shoes in the nude
A romantic interlude in a livin’ room,
In an inner tube with a dude with a bit of lube
Fuck that I’m sniffin’ glue, sippin' gin & juice,
And a little bit of paint thinner with my dinner too,
You better pay me for my bars like your rent is due,
Now hurry up and finish dude before I finish you."
GOAT
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Re: Rate and leave feedback please!
by mdemaz » Feb 10th, '11, 10:02
Hopefully you're doing a mixtape, or else L will have your ass...
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Just Silver wrote:I think every guy should massage their prostate at least once
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Re: Rate and leave feedback please!
by Sam. » Feb 10th, '11, 11:33
NIce multis and nice choice of beat.
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Re: Rate and leave feedback please!
by RainMan44 » Feb 11th, '11, 07:08
mdemaz wrote:Hopefully you're doing a mixtape, or else L will have your ass...
I am eventually going to get in the studio and record, but what do you mean about the L part ?
Last edited by RainMan44 on Feb 11th, '11, 07:10, edited 1 time in total.
"This dude doing this interview wants me to spin a few,
Lyrics while I tie my tennis shoes in the nude
A romantic interlude in a livin’ room,
In an inner tube with a dude with a bit of lube
Fuck that I’m sniffin’ glue, sippin' gin & juice,
And a little bit of paint thinner with my dinner too,
You better pay me for my bars like your rent is due,
Now hurry up and finish dude before I finish you."
GOAT
Lyrics while I tie my tennis shoes in the nude
A romantic interlude in a livin’ room,
In an inner tube with a dude with a bit of lube
Fuck that I’m sniffin’ glue, sippin' gin & juice,
And a little bit of paint thinner with my dinner too,
You better pay me for my bars like your rent is due,
Now hurry up and finish dude before I finish you."
GOAT
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Re: Rate and leave feedback please!
by RainMan44 » Feb 11th, '11, 07:09
MCSam wrote:NIce multis and nice choice of beat.
Thanks alot!
"This dude doing this interview wants me to spin a few,
Lyrics while I tie my tennis shoes in the nude
A romantic interlude in a livin’ room,
In an inner tube with a dude with a bit of lube
Fuck that I’m sniffin’ glue, sippin' gin & juice,
And a little bit of paint thinner with my dinner too,
You better pay me for my bars like your rent is due,
Now hurry up and finish dude before I finish you."
GOAT
Lyrics while I tie my tennis shoes in the nude
A romantic interlude in a livin’ room,
In an inner tube with a dude with a bit of lube
Fuck that I’m sniffin’ glue, sippin' gin & juice,
And a little bit of paint thinner with my dinner too,
You better pay me for my bars like your rent is due,
Now hurry up and finish dude before I finish you."
GOAT
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Re: Rate and leave feedback please!
by mdemaz » Feb 11th, '11, 08:21
RainMan44 wrote:mdemaz wrote:Hopefully you're doing a mixtape, or else L will have your ass...
I am eventually going to get in the studio and record, but what do you mean about the L part ?
Why not record at home? It's cheaper then renting studio time...
These days it's so easy to set up a home studio.
Eh..Nevermind...It's just I had a lot of trouble sampling in the past...It's not a good idea to use other peoples beats..
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Just Silver wrote:I think every guy should massage their prostate at least once
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by Sam. » Feb 11th, '11, 13:13
RainMan44 wrote:MCSam wrote:NIce multis and nice choice of beat.
Thanks alot!
keep at it .
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