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Postby Just Silver » Feb 18th, '11, 01:12

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Went to Fort Lauderdale and bought a scale
Had envisions that prescriptions were flown by mail
In snow or hail my project could show no fails
What i must do next is UPS or Fed Ex
Im luminous for my next check but what is my best bet
Matters who checks letters so now whats better
My cloudy endeavors lead me to cheddar
Got word that Fed Ex dont check how clever
Their probably in on it trying to get a profit
But that doesnt stop me but puts me in a hot seat
Hoping no cops see and possibly go locking me
More of a paycheck from the Florida days stress
Thats what i put up with when i put down
Pills oval tan but most are round around
These towns speed sounds coming from cars we found
At a reasonable price pills can get you what you like
Whether its the feeling or the money peeling
Its dealing regardless me and you are targets
Meet with you at Target if your local
But if your loco I am not your pill promo
These pills get you slowmo im high but cant fly like a dodo
Ive got something to show though, its the dough so
If you dont like it get fucked like a homo
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Re: Fort Lauderdale

Postby Just Silver » Feb 19th, '11, 23:01

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Re: Fort Lauderdale

Postby WakeUpShow » Feb 20th, '11, 00:31

the fuck is this even about
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Re: Fort Lauderdale

Postby Just Silver » Feb 20th, '11, 20:02

Cosh wrote:the fuck is this even about

Its about if I wanted to go to Florida get cheap prescriptions and sell them back near where I live and make a good profit
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Re: Fort Lauderdale

Postby Sam. » Feb 21st, '11, 21:11

Just Silver wrote:http://forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=24&t=108193&p=1520881#p1520881

Went to Fort Lauderdale and bought a scale
Had envisions that prescriptions were flown by mail
In snow or hail my project could show no fails
What i must do next is UPS or Fed Ex
Im luminous for my next check but what is my best bet

Matters who checks letters so now whats better
My cloudy endeavors lead me to cheddar
Got word that Fed Ex dont check how clever
Their probably in on it trying to get a profit
But that doesnt stop me but puts me in a hot seat
Hoping no cops see and possibly go locking me
More of a paycheck from the Florida days stress
Thats what i put up with when i put down
Pills oval tan but most are round around
These towns speed sounds coming from cars we found
At a reasonable price pills can get you what you like
Whether its the feeling or the money peeling
Its dealing regardless me and you are targets
Meet with you at Target if your local
But if your loco I am not your pill promo

These pills get you slowmo im high but cant fly like a dodo
Ive got something to show though, its the dough so
If you dont like it get fucked like a homo

nice use of multis just a lil excessive tho nvm ,nice verse there. smooth flow to.
nice wordplay in the first bolded part.
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Re: Fort Lauderdale

Postby Just Silver » Feb 21st, '11, 22:06

MCSam wrote:
Just Silver wrote:http://forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=24&t=108193&p=1520881#p1520881

Went to Fort Lauderdale and bought a scale
Had envisions that prescriptions were flown by mail
In snow or hail my project could show no fails
What i must do next is UPS or Fed Ex
Im luminous for my next check but what is my best bet

Matters who checks letters so now whats better
My cloudy endeavors lead me to cheddar
Got word that Fed Ex dont check how clever
Their probably in on it trying to get a profit
But that doesnt stop me but puts me in a hot seat
Hoping no cops see and possibly go locking me
More of a paycheck from the Florida days stress
Thats what i put up with when i put down
Pills oval tan but most are round around
These towns speed sounds coming from cars we found
At a reasonable price pills can get you what you like
Whether its the feeling or the money peeling
Its dealing regardless me and you are targets
Meet with you at Target if your local
But if your loco I am not your pill promo

These pills get you slowmo im high but cant fly like a dodo
Ive got something to show though, its the dough so
If you dont like it get fucked like a homo

nice use of multis just a lil excessive tho nvm ,nice verse there. smooth flow to.
nice wordplay in the first bolded part.

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