I suck ass at punchlines/metaphors....I've been trying, though...how can I make this one work? Help is appreciated
Ok, so the idea is I'm trying to say that my bars are colder than the bars in jail after the A.C of the jail stopped working...but the cold air was on at the time it stopped working, so they can't turn the cold air off now....I know it's a long thing to fit in a bar, but with your help I might be able to
What I came up with is
"These cats wanna battle me? They just be jokin' bay-bee
I got bars colder than a prison with a broken A.C"
But I don't want people to get the idea that the A.C turned off and they can't turn it on now...I want it to seem like the air was ON while it stopped working...so now the cold air can't be turned off.