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First Beat! Need Feedback!

Postby Static » Feb 15th, '11, 18:13

Or, a snippet of it atleast. I already have a text written for it, so as soon as I can, I'll get to recording. But I want to make the beat as good as possible first, therefore I'm posting it here. If you've got any constructive critism, I would love that! And any suggestions to what I may add!

It's made in FL studio, and I've only been using it for a month.

http://sharingtbh.com/30aiyv1dbjij

Feedback is highly appreciated! :worship:

Link of feed: viewtopic.php?f=44&t=107880&p=1518048#p1518048
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Re: First Beat! Need Feedback!

Postby Scrubz » Feb 18th, '11, 14:47

Not bad man, way better than my first beat LOL. If i can recomend one thing it would be to have better transitions between intro/verse/hook/verse ect. That is what really separates an average beat from a good one.

Just keep at it, download as many kits, loops and samples as you can and keep practicing. The rest will follow. :smoking:
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