Girls.

[_Steven_]

Well its like my first written in god knows how many months, only 12 bars cause im just getting back into the swing of shit plus im too tired to carry on writing lol.

feed: viewtopic.php?f=24&t=108296&p=1525904#p1525904

The days are long, Conditions unfair,
I gaze up at the stars wishing you was back here,
Your strong on the inside but still i react scared,
Tryna piece back together these shattered and cracked tears,
Look back at my past years, Hand was on the liqour,
Now its on the phone and in my head im saying pick-up,
Just your voice alone helps escape the thoughts of when i sicked up,
and hic-up'd, laying on the bathroom floor all pissed up,
So now i save it and limit myself to just occasions,
Like when we drink together that alones a celebration,
So if you say a womans evil all they'll just bleed and leave you,
I say no, Come to me for advice im always here for you to speak to.

[DƎRDYPK]

pretty good stuff Steve
keep @ it you bald headed beast

[SlimShadyX313X]

Nice , keep it up.

[Sam.]

The days are long, Conditions unfair,
I gaze up at the stars wishing you was back here,
Your strong on the inside but still i react scared,
Tryna piece back together these shattered and cracked tears,
Look back at my past years, Hand was on the liqour,
Now its on the phone and in my head im saying pick-up,
Just your voice alone helps escape the thoughts of when i sicked up,
and hic-up'd, laying on the bathroom floor all pissed up,
So now i save it and limit myself to just occasions,
Like when we drink together that alones a celebration,
So if you say a womans evil all they'll just bleed and leave you,
I say no, Come to me for advice im always here for you to speak to.

The bolded part stood out bra ,nice and simple ,good to see you dropping verses again.