Mean Fool

[VenomBlackViper]

Mean fool
Slaughtering packs of wolves while wearing sheep wool
Drop a van full of pedofiles off in front of a preschool
Drown your whole fucking family in your gene pool
I'm on an insanity spree
Cut off your moms leg and choke you with the amputees knee
Use it to hang you, laugh as you rapidly bleed
Then slit your throat & see how far your adams apple falls from the family tree
I run a daycare center full of aborted kids
In a haunted house I bought with a mortgage bid
Theres a fine line between genius & insanity, too bad i snorted it

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[VenomBlackViper]

Thanks man exactly what I was aiming for with this. I might start posting my shit in CW more often.

[Sam.]

Oh shiiiit .

[VenomBlackViper]

Oh shiiiit .

I take laughing as compliment, thereby I am

[Sam.]

Oh shiiiit .

I take laughing as compliment, thereby I am

[VenomBlackViper]

That pic deserves it's own shady shots thread tbh, being used once here just doesn't do it justice.

[Sam.]

That pic deserves it's own shady shots thread tbh, being used once here just doesn't do it justice.

word

[VenomBlackViper]

I'ma bump this one more time before posting something else

[MikeNUFC]

I like this. Obviously influenced by Rhyme Asylum and Eminem but there's nothing wrong in that.

I like how each 'mean' act linked in some way - wolves/sheep wool, drown/gene pool, paedophiles/preschool, adams apple/family tree.

And it wasn't forced because it all made sense, unlike a lot of random-content pieces where nothing links.

Good stuff.

[VenomBlackViper]

Yup Rhyme Asylums been a huge influence on my writing as of late, and thanks glad some of the best members on here like it.

[DƎRDYPK]

not too bad
keep writing
only complaints bout this is it shoulda been a lil bit longer
but it's dope for what it is

[VenomBlackViper]

Thanks bruh, & yeah it's short cuz I threw this together on Thursday night & decided to post it here as well. I finished it a couple days later & added it as a 16 to a song.

[classthe_king]

The adams apple and gene pool deff reminded me of Rhyme Asylum, dope shit

[WakeUpShow]

one of the funniest pieces I've read in a while

[ArsheyHaq]

"Mean fool
Slaughtering packs of wolves while wearing sheep wool
Drop a van full of pedofiles off in front of a preschool
Drown your whole fucking family in your gene pool"

Some dope rhyming and wordplay right there

"Theres a fine line between genius & insanity, too bad i snorted it"

Haha that was a pretty insane way to end it easily my favorite line

This is my first time reading a piece by you. I didn't know you wrote, and so well at that, but I'll definitely be looking for more from you. You really impressed me!